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Measles and mumps are two common diseases, so to prevent your self from it you should understand their similar points.

Measles and mumps are two common diseases, so to prevent your self from it you should understand their similar points. rbdJk

Measles and mumps are two common diseases, so to prevent your self from it you should understand their similar points. One similarity between Measles and Mumps is contagious viral diseases. There are spread by coughing and sneezing. The fastest way to spread the disease is breathing. Measles and Mumps both have similar symptoms and complications. They also have high fever. The complications lead to deafness. Measles and mumps have the same prevention. They are always prevention by vaccination. The first dose protect between 12 to 15 months and the second dose protect between 4 to 6 years. In summary the infection of these diseases is easy and fast, so the vaccination is very important

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