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means of transport and co2 emissions

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The most preferred means of transport which is the car is also the most CO2 emitted in kilograms per person per kilometer with about 0. 35 kg. In contrast, cycle or walk have 0 kilogram CO2 emitted in each person each kilometer. Besides, the public transport which is trains and buses have approximately 0. 01 kilograms CO2 emitted in per person per kilometer. The most preferred means of transport is car which is the most CO2 emitted in kilograms per person per kilometer with about 0. 35 kg.
The most preferred means of transport which is the car is
also
the most CO2
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emitted
in kilograms per
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person
per kilometer with about 0. 35 kg.
In contrast
, cycle or walk have 0
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kilogram
CO2
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emitted
in each
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person
each kilometer.
Besides
, the public transport which is trains and buses have approximately 0. 01 kilograms CO2
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emitted
in per
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person
per kilometer. The most preferred means of transport is car which is the most CO2
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emitted
in kilograms per
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person
per kilometer with about 0. 35 kg.

IELTS essay means of transport and co2 emissions

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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