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Many universities charge high fees from foreign students why do they do this is it fair or not

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Over recent years the popularity of international education has increased significantly among people as they are migrating Overseas to require higher education however fee structure of various foreign universities is expiry for foreign students in the local learners which is justifiable in my prospective commencing with the romancing with the cause of high tuition fees for Overseas educated in plenty of Educational Institutes predominant reason is that they are in huge demand since it can be witness that some universities worldwide recognised as they provide better education so to this persuade children to get enrolled there for better future this influence makes this reputed institutes to charge international students heavily as they do not get equality education and their donation for instance Indian educational are helpless to move abroad for tertiary level education because only theoretical portion is ping anser size in their native Nation does to have a bright future most of peoples migrate to abroad get education at any cost for the reinforcing my views it is there as it if its Educational Institutes to a equality in other words revenue generated from tution fuel is utilised to provide various facilities to cutest as they get best education with digitalised classes in this universe does it not only helps learners to run with pace but also in the organisation of college name and fame also increased tuition fees contributes to the better funded activities at University such as delivering research organising sports events and attracting the best kahlati apart from this place for NTSE scholarship for talented students or people having good academic record to appreciate them to bring laurels for the institute has charging Hai fees can be told to boost the funding to conclude I strongly believe that charging international students the higher scores have strong argument behind the idea such as providing best education along with
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education
has increased
significantly
among
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people
as they are migrating Overseas to require higher
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education
however
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fee
structure of various foreign universities is expiry for foreign
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students
in the local learners which is justifiable in my prospective commencing with the romancing with the cause of high tuition
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fees
for Overseas educated in
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plenty
of Educational Institutes predominant reason is that they are in huge demand since it can be witness that
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some
universities worldwide
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recognised
as they provide better
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education
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so
to this persuade children to
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get
enrolled there for better future this influence
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makes
this reputed institutes to charge international
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students
heavily
as they do not
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get
equality
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education
and their donation
for instance
Indian educational are helpless to
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move
abroad for tertiary level
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education
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because
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only
theoretical portion is ping
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anser
size in their native Nation does to have a bright future
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most of peoples
migrate to abroad
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get
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education
at any cost for the reinforcing my views it is there as it if its Educational Institutes to
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a
equality
in other words
revenue generated from
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tution
fuel is
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utilised
to provide various facilities to cutest as they
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get best
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education
with
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digitalised
classes in this universe does it not
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only
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helps
learners to run with pace
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but
also
in the
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organisation
of college name and fame
also
increased tuition
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fees
contributes to the better funded activities at University such as delivering research
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organising
sports
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events
and attracting the best
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kahlati
apart from this place for
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NTSE
scholarship for talented
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students
or
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people
having
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good
academic record to appreciate them to bring laurels for the institute has charging
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Hai
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fees
can be
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told
to boost the funding
to conclude
I
strongly
believe that charging international
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students
the higher scores have strong argument behind the
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idea
such as
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providing best
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education
along with
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IELTS essay Many universities charge high fees from foreign students why do they do this is it fair or not

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1 paragraphs
310 words
5.5
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