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Many students take part time jobs while studying in university. do you think it is good idea or bad idea.

It is commonly believed that several pupils who are doing academic study in institutes or colleges take part in some type of temporary employments. In this essay, I will give careful analysis of this statement. On the constructive side, there are plethora of reasons why youngsters have to half time jobs while their studies. Nowadays, due to high fees of courses in colleges parents are not able to afford their children fees that time it is beneficial for students to do jobs. They can also pay rents and meal expenses. However, when they start to do work in early age it makes them dignity to labour which is advantageous for the future. Moreover, pupils should not involve in crime and violence activities. Additionally, numerous bright learners get jobs in the university which is related to the course he or she pursue in same college. On the flip side, there are a number of cons while working part time during education. Firstly, adolescent are able to concentrate on learning which results they get in stress and depression. Furthermore, it is cumbersome to balance between study and job. Consequently, when students face failures they are not able with the situation and commit suicide. For instance, in recent survey it reveals nearly two-third of youngsters can have suicidal tendencies due to depression and education pressure. In conclusion, I accord that it is better to do jobs but pupils need to concentrate on studies as well. There should be limit on the working hours, otherwise studies will suffer

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study
 in institutes or colleges This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
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some
 type of temporary employments. In this essay, I will give careful analysis of this statement.

On the constructive side, there are plethora of reasons why youngsters This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 half time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 while their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
studies
. Nowadays, due to high fees of courses in colleges parents are not able to afford their children fees that time it is beneficial for students to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
. They can also
 pay rents and meal expenses. However
, when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to do work in early age it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
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labour
 which is advantageous for the future. Moreover
, pupils should not involve in crime and violence activities. Additionally
, numerous bright learners This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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jobs
 in the university which is related
 to the course he or she The pronoun ‘she’ is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: “pursues”, “pursued”.pursuespursued
pursue
 in same college.

On the flip side, there are a number of cons while working This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.part-time
part time
 during education. Firstly
, adolescent are able to concentrate on learning which results they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and depression. Furthermore
, it is cumbersome to balance between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. Consequently
, when students face failures they are not able with the situation and commit suicide. For instance
, in recent survey it reveals nearly
 two-third of youngsters can have suicidal tendencies due to depression and education pressure.

In conclusion
, I accord that it is better to do Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).jobs,
jobs
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but
 pupils need to concentrate on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
studies
as well
. There should be Did you mean “limited”?limited
limit
 on the working hours, otherwise
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studies
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suffer