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Many students say that staying up late helps them to learn or study better because at night they can concentarte and remember well. Others,however, say that they can’t learn or study wellat midnight beacuse this time they feel very tired. .

Many students say that staying up late helps them to learn or study better because at night they can concentarte and remember well. Others, however, say that they can’t learn or study wellat midnight beacuse this time they feel very tired. . m3MaK
Numerous students say that remaining up late makes a difference them to memorize or ponder superior since at night they can concentarte and keep in mind well. Others, however, say that they can’t learn or ponder well at midnight beacuse this time they feel exceptionally tired. This essay will discuss both view as well as including in my opinion. Firstly, I can't deny that studying at night gives me quite a lot of enjoyment. When I study at night, it helps me to concentrate much more than in the morning. Because at that time the atmosphere is usually quite quiet and no one can disturb me. Family, friends, everyone may have fallen asleep so there won't be any messages or notifications when I'm most focused on studying. And thanks to that quietness, I can remember what I'm learning well and remember it for a longer time. But with the constant staying up late like that in the long run it will be seriously bad for our health. We will be sleep deprived the next morning and go to school tired and distracted in the lesson. On the other hand, for some students who are not used to staying up late, it will be terrible and horrible for them. Because, the drowsiness and yawns will come at any time, then it will make them extremely tired and unable to focus on learning and remembering the knowledge. For some students, who spend a long day in the morning at school to study, staying up late to study is extremely difficult for them. In my opinion in this essay is that I don't really recommend staying up late to study or memorize knowledge. But staying up late to study or trying to get up early the next morning to learn it will depend on the habits of each of us. But in the long run, we should not stay up too late because it will adversely affect our own health. In conclusion, there is still a parallel situation that there will be students who like to stay up late to study and there will be types of students who cannot because it is too tired and distracting. So no matter how you study, remember to stay healthy.
Numerous
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say that remaining up
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concentarte
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. Others,
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at midnight
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beacuse
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time
they feel
exceptionally
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. This essay will discuss both view as
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well
as including in my opinion.

Firstly
, I can't deny that studying at night gives me quite
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a lot of
enjoyment. When I
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study
at night, it
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helps
me to concentrate much more than in the
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morning
.
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Because
at that
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time
the atmosphere is
usually
quite quiet and no one can disturb me. Family, friends, everyone may have fallen asleep
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so
there won't be any messages or notifications when I'm most focused on studying. And thanks to that quietness, I can remember what I'm learning
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well
and remember it for a longer
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time
.
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But
with the constant
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staying
up
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late
like that in the long run it will be
seriously
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bad
for our health. We will be sleep deprived the
next
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morning
and go to school
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tired
and distracted in the lesson.

On the other hand
, for
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some
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students
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who
are not
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used
to
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staying
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, it will be terrible and horrible for them.
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, the drowsiness and yawns will
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come
at any
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, then it will
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them
extremely
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tired
and unable to focus on learning and remembering the knowledge. For
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students
,
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spend a long day in the
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morning
at school to
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study
,
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staying
up
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study
is
extremely
difficult for them.

In my opinion in this essay is that I don't
really
recommend
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staying
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late
to
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study
or memorize knowledge.
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But
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staying
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study
or trying to
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to learn it will depend on the habits of each of us.
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in the long run, we should not stay up too
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late
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because
it will
adversely
affect our
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own
health.

In conclusion
, there is
still
a parallel situation that there will be
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students
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who
like to stay up
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late
to
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study
and there will be types of
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students
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who
cannot
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because
it is too
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tired
and distracting.
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So
no matter how you
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, remember to stay healthy.
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IELTS essay Many students say that staying up late helps them to learn or study better because at night they can concentarte and remember well. Others, however, say that they can’t learn or study wellat midnight beacuse this time they feel very tired. .

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