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Many schools these days have problem with poor students behaviour.why do you think these problems occur? What can be done to tackle these problems?

Many schools these days have problem with poor students behaviour. why do you think these problems occur? What can be done to tackle these problems? Dryp
Nowadays, many institutions are facing issues related to bad behaviour of students. This matter is investigated in the forth coming paragraphs, some suggestions are also put forward to rectify this issue. One of the main cause is biasness of teachers, they do not treat every individual in the same way, they focus more on the students who are in their contact like their relatives, their tution students and many others. Because of this, individuals behave badly in the premises. To tackle this issue, higher authorities should take some actions regarding to this problem and teachers should start giving proper attention to other students as well. Secondly, another reason can be restricting individuals in doing any kind of extra-curricular activities like playing, dancing, singing and many other things, which will make them more arrogant and they will start misbehaving with others. To solve this problem the authorities should give some time to follow their interests. This will also help the individuals to compete in various competitions related to their interest, moreover the institutions will get fame because of the students and help the individuals to maintain their behavioural changes. To conclude, the parents should keep a watch on their wards and frequently talk to them about their day at the school campus, this will help them to stay energetic and more confident.
Nowadays,
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institutions are facing issues related to
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bad
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behaviour
of
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students
. This matter
is investigated
in the forth coming paragraphs,
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some
suggestions are
also
put forward to rectify this issue.

One of the main cause is
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biasness
of teachers, they do not treat every
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individual
in the same way
, they focus more on the
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students
who are in their contact like their relatives, their
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tution
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students
and
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many
others.
Because of this
,
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individuals
behave
badly
in the premises. To tackle this issue, higher authorities should take
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some
actions
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regarding to
this problem and teachers should
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start
giving proper attention to
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other
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students
as well
.
Secondly
, another reason can be restricting
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individuals
in doing any kind of extra-curricular activities like playing, dancing, singing and
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many
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other
things, which will
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make
them more
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arrogant and
they will
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start
misbehaving with others. To solve this problem the authorities should give
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time to follow their interests. This will
also
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help
the
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individuals
to compete in various competitions related to their interest,
moreover
the institutions will
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get
fame
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because
of the
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students
and
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help
the
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individuals
to maintain their
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behavioural
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changes
.

To conclude
, the parents should
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keep
a
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watch
on their wards and
frequently
talk to them about their day at the school campus, this will
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help
them to stay energetic and more confident.
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IELTS essay Many schools these days have problem with poor students behaviour. why do you think these problems occur? What can be done to tackle these problems?

Essay
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221 words
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