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Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.

It is observed that most of the items such as food, electronic devices and consequently on that we purchase are invented in other nations. While it helps to develop international business with those countries, I believe that it results in the devastation of local traders. The main advantage of buying other country's product is that it enhances the trade with an international organization. By this way, the economy of the country will improve which helps the people to get a quality product. For example, most of the electronic items such as smart phone, tab, iPad are made in another country provides quality products and bought by most of the people. Despite this, I believe that the price of the item cannot be afforded by all the people and it may not worth for people in privileged status. As for the drawbacks are concerned, the predominant disadvantage is that it impacts the local businessperson. That is to say that they cannot compete with an international organization. Also, people tend to buy the product based on the brand rather than local product and hence it will lead them to shut down their work. For instance, in India, most of the small scale and large scale business are closed due to the low sales of their products in the local market. However, in my opinion, it may lead to loss the job for more workers working for their own land and hence people should buy native items. In conclusion, although buying different nation's product aid the country to have worldwide trade by providing quality product, it affects the inhabitants work by closing their business and hence people should get the products that are made in their homeland.

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 that most of the items such as food, electronic devices and consequently
 on that we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
are invented
 in other nations. While it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to develop international business with those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, I believe that it results in the devastation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
 traders.

The main advantage of buying other country's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 is that it enhances the trade with an international organization. By this way, the economy of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
. For example
, most of the electronic items such as Nowadays it’s more common to write this as one word.smartphone
smart phone
, tab, iPad are made
 in another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 provides quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 by most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. Despite this, I believe that the price of the item cannot be afforded
 by all the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).people, and
people and
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may not worth
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in privileged status.

As for the drawbacks are concerned
, the predominant disadvantage is that it impacts the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
 businessperson. That is
 to say that they cannot compete with an international organization. Also
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 based on the brand rather
 than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 and hence
 it will lead them to shut down their work. For instance
, in India, most of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 scale and large scale business are closed
 due to the low sales of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
 market. However
, in my opinion, it may lead to loss the job for more workers working for their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 land and hence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 native items.

In conclusion
, although buying This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 nation's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 aid the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 to have worldwide trade by providing quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
, it affects the inhabitants work by closing their business and hence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 that are made
 in their homeland. 