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One problem faced by almost every big city is traffic congestion. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

One problem faced by almost every big city is traffic congestion. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem? owaw
Currently, congestion is one of the most prevalent transport challenges in large urban agglomerations which they practically face across the world. This essay will highlight root causes of this phenomenon and suggest practical solutions to mitigate it. Perhaps, the major cause of this issue is that increasing number of automotive vehicles which clog our cities. As the world evolves, commuters are more likely to use precious cars instead of public transport, which are more convenient in trip timing, more flexible for doing multiple tasks and more faster than social transportation. A further reasonable cause is inadequacy of road capacity. Faulty design or maintenance of road system causes unnecessary congestion. To elucidate, in many cities there are frequent cases of failure to mark traffic lane unexpected changes in the number of lanes, bus stops located precisely where the road width becomes narrower and other shortcomings which disturb a smooth traffic flow. As for solutions, for encouraging drivers to abandon their behind for routine trips such as commuting to work is to institute high quality of multi- passenger vehicles on regular routes. They should deploy public transports to contribute avoiding congestion, as a result transport supply is likely to develop in response to demand. Another viable approach is that construction of additional roads is one of the most common method to resolve vehicular traffic. It is important that highly industrial highways should be improved in order to provide available standards, thus, maintain present solutions, which prevent traffic. Government should support to build public highways and expressways in order to mitigate clogs of roads. To recapitulate briefly, this essay discussed how the congestion is instigated by exploiting private cars and insufficient road system. This essay also suggested two remedies to mitigate the problem: using public transportation and improving better roads for public. If the above-mentioned measured are taken, the problem may be solved viably.
Currently
,
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congestion
is one of the most prevalent
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transport
challenges in large urban agglomerations which they
practically
face across the world. This essay will highlight root
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causes
of this phenomenon and suggest practical solutions to mitigate it. Perhaps, the major
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cause
of this issue is that increasing number of automotive vehicles which clog our cities. As the world evolves, commuters are more likely to
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use
precious cars
instead
of
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public
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transport
, which are more convenient in trip timing, more flexible for doing multiple tasks and
Use only "faster" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more faster
than social transportation. A
further
reasonable
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cause
is inadequacy of
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road
capacity. Faulty design or maintenance of
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road
system
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causes
unnecessary
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congestion
. To elucidate, in
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many
cities there are frequent cases of failure to mark
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traffic
lane unexpected
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changes
in the number of lanes, bus
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stops
located
precisely
where the
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road
width becomes narrower and other shortcomings which disturb a smooth
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traffic
flow. As for solutions, for encouraging drivers to abandon their behind for routine trips such as commuting to work is to institute high quality of multi- passenger vehicles on regular routes. They should deploy
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public
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transports
to contribute avoiding
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congestion
,
as a result
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transport
supply is likely to develop in response to demand. Another viable approach is that construction of additional
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roads
is one of the most common
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method
to resolve vehicular
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traffic
. It is
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important
that
highly
industrial highways should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
in order to provide available standards,
thus
, maintain present solutions, which
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prevent
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traffic
.
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Government
should support to build
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public
highways and expressways in order to mitigate clogs of
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roads
. To recapitulate
briefly
, this essay discussed how the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
congestion
is instigated
by exploiting private cars and insufficient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
system. This essay
also
suggested two remedies to mitigate the problem: using
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public
transportation and improving better
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roads
for
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public
. If the above-mentioned measured
are taken
, the problem may
be solved
viably
.

IELTS essay One problem faced by almost every big city is traffic congestion. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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