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Many people today do not feel sad either at home or when they are out. What are the causes and solutions ?

Many people today do not feel sad either at home or when they are out. What are the causes and solutions? dD997

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IELTS essay Many people today do not feel sad either at home or when they are out. What are the causes and solutions?

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American English

1 paragraphs

131 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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