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Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development? 3X2l

Nowadays, a myriad of people prefers to travel abroad. Although individuals will often struggle with linguistic and cultural challenges while abroad, they also gain significant life experiences that will reward them later on in their careers. I truly believe people are far better off having their careers in various nations despite the difficulties they will face inevitably. The greatest benefit of traveling abroad is that people will have life experiences that will improve them as individuals otherwise impossible if they merely lived in their own country. Being in another country requires people to push beyond the norms into unusually difficult experiences. Furthermore, it gives you the confidence, the capacity, and the capability to fought with problems. To illustrate, when I was in Germany as a student, I was facing problems every single day that was unique and novel, but in the end, I got succeed and gained significant life experience. These ultra-challenges helps me to grow as a person while abroad

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