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many people think that we have to focus on the extinction of certain animal species, while other think that we should pay attention to the problem of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Animals and all type of species depend on each other. Every organism perform a major role. Even small insects also play a big role. A number of people argue that we shall focus on the extinction of certain animal species whelm other consider that we will pay attention to the problem of human being. This essay will highlight the importance of nature things like animals, plants, insects etcetera. Because we all depend on each other.

Animals and all type of species depend on each other. Every organism Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "performs".performs
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 insects also
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 role. A number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 argue that we shall focus on the extinction of certain animal species whelm other consider that we will pay attention to the problem of human being. This essay will highlight the importance of nature things like animals, plants, insects etcetera. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 we all depend on each other. 