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many people think that watching movie gives a better experience than reading book

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The idea of watching a movie gives better knowleged than reading book is widely debeted with many people claiming that this will give you chance to know the world virtually. There are strong arguments for both the paragraph which will be elucidated in the impending paragraph. Convencing arguments can be made that, watching movie has made the good impact on person behaviour and mood. Watching movie can not only contribute to improving understanding but also lead to numerous other benefits in broadening one's horizon. Furthermore, it help to comeout from the pigeonhole and it is good way to relax the mood dspite, it reduce stress and tension and just have good time withe friends or family. For instance, on weekend while watching movie can enjoy drink or dinner. Needless to say, all these benefits stands people in good stead as far as their leaning and experience is concerned. Admittedly, reading fiction bring many benefits. Book can be taken anywhere one goes. Such as, while travelling or just taking a bus one can read a book. Besides, it is also trur that reading extends one's vocabulary, improve reading and even writing skills. reading is essential for children. Because of their range of interests improve thir imagination and help them to gain more experience and knowledge through book. Hence, it is apparent that why many are also in favour of it. From what has been discussed above, one cn conclude that both watching movie and reading book are equally important and their advantages are indeed too great to ingore.
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of watching a
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gives better
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knowleged
than
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is
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debeted
with
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many
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people
claiming that this will give you chance to know the world
virtually
. There are strong arguments for both the paragraph which will
be elucidated
in the impending paragraph.

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arguments can
be made
that, watching
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movie
has made the
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good
impact on person
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behaviour
and mood. Watching
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movie
can not
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only
contribute to improving understanding
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but
also
lead to numerous other benefits in broadening one's horizon.
Furthermore
, it
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help
to
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comeout
from the pigeonhole and it is
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good
way to relax the mood
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dspite
, it
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reduce
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stress
and tension and
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just
have
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good
time withe friends or family.
For instance
, on weekend while watching
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movie
can enjoy drink or dinner. Needless to say, all these benefits stands
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people
in
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good
stead as far as their leaning and experience
is concerned
.

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,
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reading
fiction bring
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many
benefits.
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Book
can
be taken
anywhere one goes. Such as, while travelling or
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just
taking a bus one can read a
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book
.
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, it is
also
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trur
that
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reading
extends one's vocabulary,
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improve
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reading
and even writing
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skills
.
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reading
is essential for children.
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of their range of interests
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improve
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imagination and
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help
them to gain more experience and knowledge through
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book
.
Hence
, it is apparent that why
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many
are
also
in
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favour
of it.

From what has
been discussed
above, one
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cn
conclude that both watching
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movie
and
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reading
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book
are
equally
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important
and their advantages are
indeed
too great to
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ingore
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IELTS essay many people think that watching movie gives a better experience than reading book

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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