Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

many people think that to become a sucessfull its better to choose a career early in life and never change it later to what extend do you agree with this view

many people think that to become a sucessfull its better to choose a career early in life and never change it later to what extend do you agree with this view 56M9V

Choose a career early in life and pursue it with consistency is an important key that to become a successful specialist. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement. Teenagers will have better preparation for future occupation when they decide what jobs will do. Can be saw that students who have explicit goals will know exactly what major subjects. Then, they will focus on those subjects to broaden their knowledge of the field that they choose. For example, if children want to be a doctor they will pay attention to their subjects such as chemistry, biology. In addition, they will read book and over more studies of field which choose. As a result, they will have sophisticated understanding and accumulate a significant amount of knowledge. This play a vital role in assisting them on the road to career development. Secondly, early decision making and never change it later leads youngsters to a more satisfactory working life. Studies show that when children set a goal with large ambition, they will study with determination to achieve without hesitant about anything. For instance, students take many years of training in order to become a doctor. Besides, they will have clear steps without losing time in a dead-end job. Therefore, having a specific goal to maintain their work and study spirit is very crucial contribute to success later. In conclusion, children who choose a career early in life and never change it later is necessary to become a successful specialist.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointelectnamewantcastadopt
Choose
 a career early in life and pursue it with consistency is an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 key that to become a successful specialist. In my opinion, I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
Teenagers
 will have better preparation for future occupation when they decide what jobs will do. Can be Consider using a past participle here: "sawed", "sawn", "seen".sawedsawnseen
saw
 that students who have explicit goals will know exactly what major subjects. Then, they will focus on those subjects to broaden their knowledge of the field that they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointelectnamewantcastadopt
choose
. For example
, if children want to be a doctor they will pay attention to their subjects such as chemistry, biology. In addition
, they will read book and over more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
studies
 of field which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointelectnamewantcastadopt
choose
. As a result
, they will have sophisticated understanding and accumulate a significant amount of knowledge. This play a vital role in assisting them on the road to career development.

Secondly
, early This word is normally spelled with hyphen.decision-making
decision making
 and never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 it later leads youngsters to a more satisfactory working life. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
Studies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 that when children set a goal with large ambition, they will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
 with determination to achieve without hesitant about anything. For instance
, students take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years of training in order to become a doctor. Besides
, they will have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 steps without losing time in a dead-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 job. Therefore
, having a specific goal to maintain their work and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
 spirit is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 crucial contribute to success later.

In conclusion
, children who You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointelectnamewantcastadopt
choose
 a career early in life and never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 it later is necessary to become a successful specialist. 