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damage to borrowed guitar

damage to borrowed guitar oRARq

Hope you are doing well during these times, I am doing fine here, but you will be shocked when you know the purpose of this letter. The strings of the guitar I borrowed a month ago from you, broke. I want to apologize for this act of mishandling as it was not intentional. When I packed the guitar after my rehearsals I usually do not check after coming back, but when unpacked to rehearse and found the strings to be broken. I know you are going to be mad at me because even you have to perform next week at an event. Please, if possible, send me a copy of the bill to reach out the same place from where it was bought to fix the strings as earliest with same authenticity. If not, I will borrow the electric guitar from one of my band members so you do not have to face any problem. please manage the time till you do not have the guitar and will see you soon with the same guitar I borrowed.

Hope you are doing well during these times, I am doing fine here, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you will be shocked
 when you know the purpose of this letter. The strings of the guitar I borrowed a month ago from you, broke.

I want to apologize for this act of mishandling as it was not intentional. When I packed the guitar after my rehearsals I usually
 do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 after coming back, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when unpacked to rehearse and found the strings to be broken
.

I know you are going to be mad at me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 even you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 perform next
 week at an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, if possible, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me a copy of the bill to reach out the same place from where it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the strings as earliest with same authenticity. If not, I will borrow the electric guitar from one of my band members This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 face any problem.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlease
please
 manage the time till you do not have the guitar and will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 with the same guitar I borrowed. 