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Advantages and disadvantages of using plastic money in day-to-day life?

Advantages and disadvantages of using plastic money in day-to-day life? 56q6N
In this concurrent era, majority of people using different kinds of payment method like credit card or debit card. However, the trend to use plastic money can ensure easy transactions and easy to carry it but can also lead certain drawbacks. The most significant benefit to using a credit card is very convenient to carry in your pockets. It is safe when you have a card with you as even if it is lost, you can always call the bank and ask them to block it. But when people us the cash, they are not left with that option and they will end up loosing their money. Cards are waterproof so they do not have to get panicked even if water spilled over their wallet. Another positive side is it is eliminating crime rates. Keeping cash in hand is not a safe is not a safe thing to do. Plastic money safe rather than carrying a cash in your pockets. People do not have to worry when someone runs away with their wallet, as you only have plastic money in it. Thief need pin number to use it so he can not take the cash or swipe it. As soon as they know that they are pickpocketed. They can call the bank and ask them to block or cancel the card. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages to using a plastic money. It is not totally safe. There is a certain amount of risk involved in transactions which involves plastic money as well. Take for example, when people are doing online shopping they are exchanging the details relating to their card over the internet which is not always a safe place. Some websites are just set up to steal our financial information and rob money thereby. Even worse, plastic money is not complete replacement for cash. In rural areas we hardly find any shops that accept credit card. It makes us unnecessary to carry some cash always for our safety. To conclude, while using a plastic money it eliminates pickpocketing for people and easy for transactions, they also have to deal with downsides because it is not completely safe for people. Therefore, people should think wisely to using a plastic money for their routine life
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majority of
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people
using
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different
kinds

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of
payment method like credit
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card
or debit
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card
.
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, the

trend to
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use
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plastic
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money
can ensure easy transactions and

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easy
to carry it
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but
can
also
lead certain drawbacks. The most significant benefit to using a credit
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card
is
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very


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convenient
to carry in your pockets. It is
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safe
when you have
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a


card with you as even if it
is lost
, you can always call the bank

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and
ask them to block it.
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But
when
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people
us the
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cash
, they
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are


not
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left
with that
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option and
they will
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up loosing their

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money
.
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Cards
are waterproof
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so
they do not
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have to
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get


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panicked
even if water spilled over their wallet. Another

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positive
side is it is eliminating crime rates. Keeping
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cash
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in


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hand
is not a
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safe
is not a
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safe
thing to do.
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Plastic
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money
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safe


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rather
than carrying a
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cash
in your pockets.
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do not
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have


to worry when someone runs away with their wallet, as you

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only
have
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plastic
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money
in it. Thief need
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pin number
to
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use
it
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so


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he
can not take the
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cash
or swipe it. As
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soon
as they know
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that


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they
are
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pickpocketed
. They can call the bank and ask them
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to


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block
or cancel the
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card
.
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, there are
also
disadvantages to using
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a


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plastic
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money
. It is not
totally
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safe
. There is a certain amount
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of


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risk
involved in transactions which involves
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plastic
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money
as well
. Take
for example
, when
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people
are doing online
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shopping


they are exchanging the
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details
relating to their
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card
over the

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internet
which is not always a
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safe
place.
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Some
websites
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are


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just
set up to steal our financial information and rob money

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thereby
. Even worse,
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plastic
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money
is not
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complete


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replacement
for
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cash
. In rural areas we hardly find any
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shops


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that
accept credit
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card
. It
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makes
us unnecessary to carry
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some


The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'cash'.
cash always
for our safety.

To conclude
, while using a
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plastic
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it eliminates

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pickpocketing
for
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people
and easy for transactions, they
also


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have to
deal with downsides
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because
it is not completely safe

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for
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people
.
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,
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people
should
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think
wisely
to using a

plastic
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money
for their routine life
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of using plastic money in day-to-day life?

Essay
  American English
32 paragraphs
376 words
5.5
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