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There is currently a contentious argument over whether environmental issues need help from not only government but also bussinesses and individuals.I totally agree with this opinion because it depends on people awareness and solution, finance from government.

There is currently a contentious argument over whether environmental issues need help from not only government but also bussinesses and individuals. I totally agree with this opinion because it depends on people awareness and solution, finance from government. The main reason why I believe environmental issues should be helped from individuals and bussinesses because it depends one person’ awareness. This is due if government announce way to resolve problems but people don’t follow the method then the problems won’t be solved completely. Another reason why I support the notion that environmental problems are not solved by bussinesses and person only. This is because inhabitant cannot afford money for fix the consequent and finance of environment matters but government can do that. In conclusion, I completely agree that all solution to manage the problem of environment is subject to government, bussinesses even individuals. Given this situation, it seems that every people have to mutual support more.

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help
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only
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government
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but
also
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bussinesses
 and individuals. I totally
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agree
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because
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people
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government
.

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helped
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bussinesses
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because
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government
 announce way to resolve You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
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people
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problems
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Another reason why I support the notion that environmental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
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 and person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 inhabitant cannot afford money for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the consequent and finance of environment matters This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 can do that.

In conclusion
, I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that all solution to manage the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 of environment is subject to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
, Possible spelling mistake found.businesses
bussinesses
 even individuals. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 this situation, it seems that every This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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have to
 mutual support more. 