Many people think hosting as international sporting event is beneficial to a country, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.2
Many people think hosting as international sporting event is beneficial to a country, while others disagree. v. 2
It is thought by some that it is advantageous for a country that held international sport events while there are others who argue with this statement. In my opinion, although country spend tremendous amount of money for holding sport events, I consider that worldwide sport events are beneficial for a country as they become more popular.
On the one hand, it is often thought by many people that countries have to spend huge amount of money on preparation works for international sport events. These is because cities are usually do not ready to accept many people, and they have to improve transport system, housing and sport facilities. For example, Russian Federation had to build up many new sport facilities and hotels for short period of time, many private houses were demolished to make a way for new hotels and sport villages.
On the other hand, according to some people, the country might become more popular after such big worldwide sport events, as a result more and more people may visit that countries and spend there their money and I agree. The Country become popular around the world while sport events being held there as many people watch these events on TV and they become familiar for them. For instance, according to recent research there was a 20% increase of tourists who visited Russian Federation after Football world cup event was held there.
In conclusion, although host countries spend huge amount of money in order to prepare for worldwide sport events, I believe that it is beneficial as it helps country to become attractive for many people.
It is
thought
by
some
that it is advantageous for a
country
that held international
sport
events
while there are others who argue with this statement. In my opinion, although
country
spend
tremendous amount of
money
for holding
sport
events
, I consider that worldwide
sport
events
are beneficial for a
country
as they
become
more popular.
On the one hand, it is
often
thought
by
many
people
that
countries
have to
spend
huge amount of
money
on preparation works for international
sport
events
.
These is
because
cities are
usually
do
not ready to accept
many
people
, and they
have to
improve
transport system, housing and
sport
facilities.
For example
, Russian Federation had to build up
many
new
sport
facilities and hotels for short period of time,
many
private
houses
were demolished
to
make
a way for new hotels and
sport
villages.
On the other hand
, according to
some
people
, the
country
might
become
more popular after such
big
worldwide
sport
events
,
as a result
more and more
people
may visit that
countries
and
spend
there their
money
and I
agree
. The
Country
become
popular around the world while
sport
events
being held
there as
many
people
watch
these
events
on
TV and
they
become
familiar for them.
For instance
, according to recent research there was a 20% increase of tourists who visited Russian Federation after Football world cup
event
was held
there.
In conclusion
, although host
countries
spend
huge amount of
money
in order to prepare for worldwide
sport
events
, I believe that it is beneficial as it
helps
country
to
become
attractive for
many
people
.
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47Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes