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Many people these days are dying of road accident. What are the causes of such accidents and how it can be controlled?

Many people these days are dying of road accident. What are the causes of such accidents and how it can be controlled? Ykp3N
Accidents of road is the major concern in today's world as thousand of people each day loose their life because of it. Carelessness, vehicle status, condition of road and climate are the factors responsible for it. Awareness among public is one of the possible way to deal with this issue. To start with, among all, carelessness is accounted to be a main reason behind accidents on travel routes. For instance, when an individual drinks and drives, they will not have proper control over their vehicle resulting in accidents. Similarly, another factor which cause road accidents is the condition of roads. It is often reported that inproper construction of travel path such as sharp bends, unmanaged trails have been reason behind several accidents.
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IELTS essay Many people these days are dying of road accident. What are the causes of such accidents and how it can be controlled?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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