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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be . Shoul goverent giva more funancial support to local film industries.

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be. Shoul goverent giva more funancial support to local film industries. EBKr
Watching film plays an essential role in our life, These days, foreign films are dominant rather than local ones. this essay will highlight what could be reason for this. Should goverenment donate financial support to local film industries. It is true that there are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Reserchers show that many people prefer to watch foreign films because foreign films is high quality and any different situation which can attract all of the people. Additionally, there are many famous actors in the world. In foreign country, film companies select these kind of actors in order to gain more sincere. As a result, they can earn much money from their one film. Meanwhile, many people try to watch foreign films for learning other languages and other country's tradition and culture. This is the one of the main reason why foreign films are more popular. On the one hand, government gave money to film-makers to create very high quality and sensible film. In my point if view, govermment donate much money to film-makers. Many people complaint about films which are produced in their country. locally produced films are of them same events I situations. Because film-makers can receive little money from governmeny. There are a lot of talented people who are able to creat very best fillb but they have not enough money to do this and they have lack of equipment. Thus government should give financial support. If the govermment help to give much money to film- makers, they can create extremely high quality and sensible film. In conclusin. Both foreign and local fillm have positive effect in our life. Goverement should donate money to both of them.
Watching film plays an essential role in our life, These days,
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foreign
films are dominant
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essay will highlight what could be reason for this. Should
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goverenment
donate financial support to local film industries. It is true that there are various reasons why
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many
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people
find
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foreign
films more enjoyable than the films produced in their
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own
countries.
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Reserchers
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many
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people
prefer to
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watch
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foreign
films
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because
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foreign
films is high quality and any
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different
situation which can attract
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all of the
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people
.
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, there are
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many
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famous
actors in the world. In
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foreign
country, film
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companies
select
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these kind
of actors in order to gain more sincere.
As a result
, they can earn much
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money
from their one film. Meanwhile,
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many
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people
try to
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watch
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foreign
films for learning other languages and other country's tradition and culture. This is the one of the main reason why
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foreign
films are more popular. On the one hand,
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government
gave
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money
to film-makers to create
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very
high quality and sensible film. In my point if
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view
,
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govermment
donate much
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money
to film-makers.
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Many
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people
complaint about films which
are produced
in their country.
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locally
produced films are of them same
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events
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.
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film-makers can receive
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little
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money
from
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governmeny
. There are
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a lot of
talented
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people
who are able to
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creat
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very
best fillb
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but
they have not
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enough
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money
to do
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this and
they have lack of equipment.
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government
should give financial support. If the
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govermment
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help
to give much
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money
to film- makers, they can create
extremely
high quality and sensible film. In
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conclusin
. Both
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foreign
and local
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fillm
have
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positive
effect in our life.
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Goverement
should donate
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money
to both of them.

IELTS essay Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be. Shoul goverent giva more funancial support to local film industries.

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