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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative?

Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative? ymlV
unlike the past, when people earned money they were saveing some amount for the future and emergency medical problem, at present, mostly people do not save money for the better future and they spend money for make better present. It is impossible to get something for nothing. We have to earn money to live comfortably. There are certain expenses that cannot be done away with. For example, we all need food to eat and clothes to wear. We also have a responsibility to take care of our dependent children, parents and spouse. All of these are good reasons to spend money. However, I am against spending money just for the sake of it. There are people who spend every penny they earn. They buy things without even bothering to check whether they actually need them. While spending might give them some momentary pleasures, they will soon find themselves in deep financial problems. There is no harm in enjoying life by going on a holiday or buying the latest fashion clothes or accessories. However, one must ensure that one is not spending more than one can afford. Also, emergencies may arise any time. For example, one can fall ill or lose job. It is impossible to tide over such crises without adequate savings. Just like some people enjoy spending, there are also some people who enjoy saving. In their relentless quest to save as much as they can, they deprive themselves of the little pleasures in life. These people may have huge bank balances but they fail to enjoy life. Life is short and no one can carry their savings with them to the other world. It is therefore pointless to save all the money one earns without enjoying the little pleasures of the world. Happiness, after all, is the biggest wealth. To conclude, the very purpose of earning money is to lead a comfortable life. This requires one to save and spend in the right amounts.
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amount for the future and emergency medical problem, at present,
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people
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money
for the better
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for
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make
better present.

It is impossible to
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something for nothing. We
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earn
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money
to
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live
comfortably
. There are certain expenses that cannot
be done
away with.
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, we all need food to eat and clothes to wear. We
also
have a responsibility to take care of our dependent children, parents and spouse. All of these are
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good
reasons to
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money.

However
, I am against
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for the sake of it. There are
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who
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every penny they earn. They
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things without even bothering to
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whether they actually need them. While
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might give them
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momentary pleasures, they will
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find themselves in deep financial problems. There is no harm in enjoying
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life
by going on a holiday or buying the latest fashion clothes or accessories.
However
, one
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must
ensure that one is not
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more than one can afford.
Also
, emergencies may arise any time.
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, one can fall ill or lose job. It is impossible to tide over such crises without adequate savings.

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like
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, there are
also
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who enjoy saving. In their relentless quest to
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as much as they can, they deprive themselves of the
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little
pleasures in
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life
. These
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may have huge bank balances
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but
they fail to enjoy
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life
.
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is short and no one can carry their savings with them to the other world. It is
therefore
pointless to
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save
all the
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money
one earns without enjoying the
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little
pleasures of the world. Happiness,
after all
, is the biggest wealth.

To conclude
, the
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purpose of earning
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money
is to lead a comfortable
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life
. This requires one to
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save
and
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spend
in the right amounts.
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IELTS essay Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative?

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