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Many people nowadays change career more frequently than ever before while others stick to a single job. What are the advantages and disadvantages of changing career?

Many people nowadays change career more frequently than ever before while others stick to a single job. What are the advantages and disadvantages of changing career? AjJXl
In recent years, changing career is common. There are two sides of the coin. And in this essay, the pros and cons of changing career will be analysed. On the one hand, a person can consider changing of job like a change of activity. Because it appears often (quite? ) enough then job transforms to routine and doesn’t bring a pleasure anymore. For example, we can observe it with a teacher. One (or the one? ) teaches children for about fifteen years, and the risk of professional burnout is high. Therefore, it is worth switсhing the job to the one that provides the person with a more pleasant occupation. Also, we should keep in mind that people are changing and gradually his priorities are changing too. Thus, he can find a more suitable profession for himself and become more balanced individual. It is worth noting another positive bonus. If an employee doesn’t change his occupation it could be affected his salary increase. Turning to the other side of the argument, there are some negatives too. Firstly, if the person changes his field of activity radically he will have to start from the bottom. He need to receive an education additional and new skills because he will face the lack of knowledge and experience. Especially when we are talking about fundamental professions such as doctors, engineers, linguists, painters. Secondly, new job is a new staff. It is not easy to be additive without any problems and very quickly. Because there are unspoken rules, established connections. It will take some time to get used to it. All things considered, changing career is never easy. The person should weigh up all consequences in this question. But in this task there is one hint that possibly the person will make a good decision if he does that he really likes in his life.
In recent years,
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career is common. There are two sides of the coin. And in this essay, the pros and cons of
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changing
career will be
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On the one hand, a
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person
can consider
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changing
of
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job
like a
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change
of activity.
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Because
it appears
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often
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enough
then
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job
transforms to routine and doesn’t bring a pleasure anymore.
For example
, we can observe it with a teacher. One (or the one?
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)
teaches children for about fifteen years, and the
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risk
of professional burnout is high.
Therefore
, it is worth
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switсhing
the
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job
to the one that provides the
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person
with a more pleasant occupation.
Also
, we should
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keep
in mind that
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people
are
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and
gradually
his priorities are
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too.
Thus
, he can find a more suitable profession for himself and become more balanced individual. It is worth noting another
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positive
bonus.
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an employee doesn’t
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his occupation it could be
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affected
his salary increase.

Turning to the other side of the argument, there are
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some
negatives too.
Firstly
, if the
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person
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changes
his field of activity
radically
he will
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have to
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start
from the bottom. He need to receive an education additional and new
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skills
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because
he will face the lack of knowledge and experience.
Especially
when we are talking about fundamental professions such as doctors, engineers, linguists, painters.
Secondly
, new
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job
is a new staff. It is not easy to be additive without any problems and
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very
quickly
.
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Because
there are unspoken
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rules
, established connections. It will take
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some
time to
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get
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used
to it.

All things considered,
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career is never easy. The
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person
should weigh up all consequences in this question.
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But
in this task there is one hint that
possibly
the
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person
will
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make
a
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good
decision if he does that he
really
likes in his life.
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IELTS essay Many people nowadays change career more frequently than ever before while others stick to a single job. What are the advantages and disadvantages of changing career?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
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