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Many people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is certainly true that environmental problems should be taken seriously in order to prevent disaster in the future. Unfortunately, however, most people do not take this threat seriously enough and this is for a number of reasons. The following essay will outline why the majority of people do not care enough about the environment. Perhaps the main reason people do not give the environment much thought is because at the moment it does not affect their daily life. This is because, generally, they cannot see how global warming or pollution is destroying the environment. It is only when a crisis occurs, such as flooding, that people start to consider the reasons behind it. However, these are soon forgotten and the situation is once again ignored. Another reason environmental issues are ignored is that people do not know enough about them. Although it is generally understood that recycling helps to save resources, this is perhaps the only step people take to help the situation. Most people have heard of global warming and pollution, but do not fully understand the implications of them. If they did, sure they would use their car less and try at all costs to save resources more. Many people also believe that these environmental problems will not impact society for another 50 to 100 years. Consequently, people feel these problems can be dealt with then by future generations. Overall, therefore, whilst there may be some people who are fully aware of the environmental problems facing the planet, the majority of the population still do not give them the attention they deserve.
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certainly
true that
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environmental
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problems
should
be taken
seriously
in order to
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prevent
disaster in the future. Unfortunately,
however
, most
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people
do not take this threat
seriously
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enough
and this is for a number of
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reasons
. The following essay will outline why the majority of
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people
do not care
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enough
about the environment.

Perhaps the main
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reason
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people
do not give the environment much
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thought
is
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because
at the moment it does not affect their daily life. This is
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because
,
generally
, they cannot
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see
how global warming or pollution is destroying the environment. It is
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only
when a crisis occurs, such as flooding, that
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people
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start
to consider the
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reasons
behind it.
However
, these are
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soon
forgotten and the situation is once again
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ignored
.

Another
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reason
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environmental
issues are
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ignored
is that
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people
do not know
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enough
about them. Although it is
generally
understood that recycling
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helps
to save resources, this is perhaps the
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only
step
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people
take to
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help
the situation. Most
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people
have heard of global warming and pollution,
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but
do not
fully
understand the implications of them. If they did, sure they would
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use
their car less and try at all costs to save resources more.

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Many
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people
also
believe that these
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environmental
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problems
will not impact society for another 50 to 100 years.
Consequently
,
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people
feel these
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problems
can
be dealt
with then by future generations.

Overall
,
therefore
, whilst there may be
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some
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people
who are
fully
aware of the
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environmental
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problems
facing the planet, the majority of the population
still
do not give them the attention they deserve.
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IELTS essay Many people do not care enough about environmental issues. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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