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Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment. Whilst this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?

Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment. Whilst this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles? 3QMb
In today's world, it has been observed that majority of the population is using cars and motorcycles for commuting purpose, even though, people are well aware that these have a detrimental effect on the environment. This essay will examine the reasons for the constant use of two-wheelers and four-wheelers as well as will also suggest the possible solutions to alleviate this problem. The predominant factors resulting in the unceasing usage of private vehicles is that they are time-saving and flexible. In other words, if one travels by personal transport then it consumes less time as compared to public transportation. For instance, people can travel in their cars without wasting a single minute, whereas they need to wait for the arrival of the buses and trains at stations. Flexibility, is another important aspect that tempts the Populus to overuse private vehicles. Individuals can travel at any point of the day without the need of walking down to the train or bus station. Furthermore, in case of emergencies such as going to a doctor or being on time for an appointment, owning a private mode of transport is the most convenient option. Nevertheless, there are potential solutions that could prove effective In decreasing the usage of private conveyance. First of all, the government needs to strengthen the public transport system. The frequency of buses and trains should be increased to reduce the waiting time. Moreover, direct routes with fewer halts need to be introduced to help passengers reach their destinations on time, also, to discourage the rampant use of the private mode of transportation people must be encouraged to adopt the carpool system. For example, If the colleagues or friends follow the same route to their office, then they can travel together in the same vehicle rather than commuting into different vehicles, thus this system will lower the traffic congestion and help in decreasing the pollution level. In conclusion, due to the time constraint and convenience provided by personal transportation, it is used by a multitude of people. However, if both the government and citizens take responsibility and use appropriate measures to tackle this issue, it will result in reduced traffic load as well as consequentially lead to a clean and healthy environment.
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today
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been observed
that majority of the population is using cars and motorcycles for commuting purpose,
even though
,
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people
are well aware that these have a detrimental effect on the environment. This essay will examine the reasons for the constant
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use
of
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two-wheelers
and
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four-wheelers
as well
as will
also
suggest the possible solutions to alleviate this problem.

The predominant factors resulting in the unceasing usage of
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private
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vehicles
is that they are time-saving and flexible.
In other words
, if one
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travels
by personal transport then it consumes less
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time
as compared to public transportation.
For instance
,
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people
can
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travel
in their cars without wasting a single minute, whereas they
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need
to wait for the arrival of the buses and trains at stations. Flexibility, is another
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important
aspect that tempts the
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Populus
to overuse
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private
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vehicles
. Individuals can
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travel
at any point of the day without the
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need
of walking down to the train or bus station.
Furthermore
, in case of emergencies such as going to a doctor or being on
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time
for an appointment, owning a
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private
mode of transport is the most convenient option.

Nevertheless
, there are potential solutions that could prove effective In decreasing the usage of
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private
conveyance.
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First of all
, the
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government
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needs
to strengthen the public transport system. The frequency of buses and trains should
be increased
to
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reduce
the waiting
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time
.
Moreover
, direct routes with fewer halts
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need
to
be introduced
to
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help
passengers reach their destinations on
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time
,
also
, to discourage the rampant
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use
of the
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private
mode of transportation
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people
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must
be encouraged
to adopt the carpool system.
For example
, If the colleagues or friends follow the same route to their office, then they can
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travel
together in the same
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vehicle
rather
than commuting into
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different
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vehicles
,
thus
this system will lower the traffic congestion and
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help
in decreasing the pollution level.

In conclusion
, due to the
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time
constraint and convenience provided by personal transportation, it is
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used
by a multitude of
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people
.
However
, if both the
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government
and citizens take responsibility and
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use
appropriate measures to tackle this issue, it will result in
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reduced
traffic load
as well
as
consequentially
lead to a clean and healthy environment.
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IELTS essay Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment. Whilst this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
371 words
6.0
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