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many people complain about stress at work. How can employers reduce stress and what can employees do on their own to resolve this problem?

many people complain about stress at work. How can employers reduce stress and what can employees do on their own to resolve this problem? k6Kq8
Over the cause of the last decade, most of the people are stressed because of there current job. Moreover, their working hours are exceeded because of serveral factors. This essay analyses the reason for that problems and provide some advices to overcome the issues. During this Covid pandamic, a large amount of workers are being forced to work from home. While many argue that it is an acceptable approach, many employees struggle a lot because they are distracted by household works. For example; the officers with children cannot properly concentrate because the young people make noise and play around. So, this kind of problems make difficult to work and reduce the productivity. In contrast, the offices are the suitable environments, because they provide peaceful and calm atmoshere to work without anxioty. In addition, my individuals are requested to do extra hours because of this epidemic. In other words, managers are under pressure to deliver the products to their clients on time, so they force the co-workers to finish off the taskes even after normal working hours. To overcome these problemactic matters, several actions can be taken by the companies and it is essential to make the workplace a healthy and productive place. For example, the company managements can provide support for the workers to improve mental health. They can hire professional mental trainner and conduct trainning sessons. In addition. they firms have the responsibility to regulate the rule on working hours In conclusion, people are working with pressure and depression. So it's the responsibile of the companies to make the workers are satisfied with the office tasks.
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people
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stressed
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because
of
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there
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current
job.
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working
hours
are exceeded
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because
of
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serveral
factors. This essay analyses the reason for that problems and provide
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some
advices to overcome the issues.

During this
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Covid
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pandamic
, a large amount of workers
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are
being forced
to
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work
from home. While
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many
argue that it is an acceptable approach,
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many
employees struggle a lot
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because
they
are distracted
by household works.
For example
; the officers with children cannot
properly
concentrate
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because
the young
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people
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make
noise and play around.
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So
, this kind of problems
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make
difficult to
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work
and
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reduce
the productivity.
In contrast
, the offices are the suitable environments,
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because
they provide peaceful and calm
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atmoshere
to
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work
without
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anxioty
.
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, my individuals
are requested
to do extra hours
because of this
epidemic.
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In
other words, managers are under pressure to deliver the products to their clients on time,
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so
they force the co-workers to finish off the
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taskes
even after normal
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working
hours.

To overcome these
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problemactic
matters, several actions can
be taken
by the
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companies
and it is essential to
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make
the workplace a healthy and productive place.
For example
, the
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company
managements can provide support for the workers to
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improve
mental health. They can hire professional mental
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trainner
and conduct
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trainning
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sessons
.
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.
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they
firms have the responsibility to regulate the
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rule
on
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working
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hours


In conclusion
,
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are
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working
with pressure and depression.
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it's the
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responsibile
of the
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companies
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make
the workers
are satisfied
with the office tasks.
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IELTS essay many people complain about stress at work. How can employers reduce stress and what can employees do on their own to resolve this problem?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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