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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with knowledge and skill needed in the workplace while the other argue that the main function of universities is to provide students with theoretical knowledge discuss

Some people think that universities should provide graduates with knowledge and skill needed in the workplace while the other argue that the main function of universities is to provide students with theoretical knowledge discuss NmGmW
Few people believe that Institute may only learn about that things they want in their job and rest of them think that students should graduates by all course related information this essay will discuss both of the aforementioned views in subsequent paragraphs To begin with some people says that the universities provide them more extra knowledge and due to this they wish their time in money on that things so if university just teach them only about the knowledge and skills which useful for their job it it should better for them On the other hand a number of people think students should graduates with three vertical knowledge because other graduates everyone get a job easily but when they have a more knowledge then other Sunday on more and they can get their dream job
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believe that Institute may
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learn about that things they want in their
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and rest of them
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that students should
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graduates
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that the universities provide them more extra
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knowledge
and due to this they wish their time in money on that things
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if university
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teach them
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about the
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knowledge
and
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skills
which useful for their
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job
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it it
should
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for them
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students should
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graduates
with three vertical
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knowledge
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other graduates everyone
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easily
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when they have a more
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knowledge
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more and
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IELTS essay Some people think that universities should provide graduates with knowledge and skill needed in the workplace while the other argue that the main function of universities is to provide students with theoretical knowledge discuss

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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