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Many people claim that people who control the media, also control the way news is covered. This affects how information is given and what attitudes and opinions are expressed

Many people claim that people who control the media, also control the way news is covered. This affects how information is given and what attitudes and opinions are expressed YgpKm

OVER THE YEARS, CELEBRITIES HAVE BEEN USED IN PRODUCT ADVERTISEMENT AND PROMOTIONS. THIS WAS INTENDED TO PUBLICIZE AND ALSO INCREASE THE SALES OF THE COMMODITY. THE DESIRE TO BECOME POPULAR KEEPS INCREASING WITH MORE FOCUS ON THE HIGH QUALITY LIFE WITHOUT CONSIDERING THE MONITORED LIFESTYLE THAT COMES WITH IT. THIS ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN IN DETAILS THE PROS AND CONS OF THIS BELIEF WITH EXAMPLES. TO BEGIN WITH, BEING POPULAR ATTRACTS SOME BENEFIT SUCH AS ACCESS TO HIGH QUALITY LIFE. WHILE FEATURING IN ADVERTISEMENT AND PROMOTIONS, THE COMPANY OFFERS GIFT ITEMS AND ALSO COUPONS FOR DISCOUNT ON PURCHASE. NOT ONLY DO THEY ACCESS EXCLUSIVE COMMODITIES BUT THEY ARE ALSO OPPORTUNE TO MEET AND CONNECT WITH OTHER FAMOUS PERSONALITIES. FOR INSTANCE, A POPULAR NIGERIAN ACTRESS WHO PROMOTED A BREAKFAST CEREAL WAS GIVEN A FIFTY THOUSAND WORTH OF ACCESS CARD TO PURCHASE ANY OF THE COMPANY'S PRODUCT. ALSO, A FRIEND OF MINE WHOSE FATHER IS A PROMINENT ARTIST GOT HER VISA TO MIGRATE TO THE UNITED KINGDOM IN NO TIME WHILE I WAS STILL STRUGGLING WITH PROTOCOLS. THE EASE WAS AS A RESULT OF THE CONNECTIONS WITH THE FELLOW STARDOM. ON THE OTHER HAND, BEEN KNOWN ALSO ATTRACTS LOTS OF ATTENTION MAJORLY THE LIFESTYLE AS WELL AS BACKGROUND RESEARCH ON THE PAST LIFE OF THESE EMINENT PERSONALTIES. LIFE INCOGNITO IS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE FOR PROMINENT PEOPLE OWING TO THE FACT THAT PEOPLE AROUND WILL ALWAYS MAKE FUSS AT THEIR PRESENCE EITHER WITH GOOD OR BAD INTENTIONS. OFTEN TIMES, HIGHLIGHT OF PLACES VISITED AND ATTIRES ARE PUBLISHED IN DAILY NEWS AS WELL AS SCANDALS. FOR INSTANCE, THE WIFE OF A STATE GOVERNOR HAVING A SIDE TALK WITH ANOTHER MAN. SUCH CAPTION AS THIS ARE TARGETED TO EXPOSE THEIR LIFESTYLE. IN ADDITION, I THINK FAME IS DESIRABLE AS IT ALLOWS FOR EXQUISITE AND EXCLUSIVE STANDARD OF LIVING IF THE ATTENTIONS AND ATTRACTIONS CAN BE MINIMIZED. HUMAN ACTIVITIES AND LIFESTYLE SHOULD NOT BE PUBLISHED WITHOUT BEING PERMITTED BY THE CONCERNED PERSON. CONCLUSIVELY, THE BENEFICIAL AND ADVERSE EFFECT OF PROMINENCE SHOULD BE WELL CONSIDERED PRIOR TO TAKE THE PATH OF FAME AS ONE MIGHT OUTWEIGH THE OTHER.

OVER THE YEARS, CELEBRITIES HAVE BEEN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
USED
 IN PRODUCT ADVERTISEMENT AND PROMOTIONS. THIS WAS INTENDED
 TO PUBLICIZE AND ALSO
 INCREASE THE SALES OF THE COMMODITY. THE DESIRE TO BECOME POPULAR This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
KEEPS
 INCREASING WITH MORE FOCUS ON THE HIGH QUALITY You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
LIFE
 WITHOUT CONSIDERING THE MONITORED LIFESTYLE THAT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
COMES
 WITH IT. THIS ESSAY WILL This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
EXPLAIN
 IN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
DETAILS
 THE PROS AND CONS OF THIS BELIEF WITH EXAMPLES.

TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
BEGIN
 WITH, BEING POPULAR ATTRACTS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
 BENEFIT SUCH AS ACCESS TO HIGH QUALITY You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
LIFE
. WHILE FEATURING IN ADVERTISEMENT AND PROMOTIONS, THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
COMPANY
 OFFERS GIFT ITEMS AND ALSO
 COUPONS FOR DISCOUNT ON This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
PURCHASE
. NOT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
ONLY
 DO THEY ACCESS EXCLUSIVE COMMODITIES This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
 THEY ARE ALSO
 OPPORTUNE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
MEET
 AND CONNECT WITH OTHER This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
FAMOUS
 PERSONALITIES. FOR INSTANCE
, A POPULAR NIGERIAN ACTRESS WHO PROMOTED A BREAKFAST CEREAL WAS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
GIVEN
 A FIFTY THOUSAND WORTH OF ACCESS CARD TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
PURCHASE
 ANY OF THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
COMPANY
'S PRODUCT. ALSO
, A FRIEND OF MINE WHOSE FATHER IS A PROMINENT ARTIST This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
GOT
 HER VISA TO MIGRATE TO THE The proper noun "United KINGDOM" needs to be capitalized.United KINGDOM
UNITED KINGDOM
 IN NO TIME WHILE I WAS STILL
 STRUGGLING WITH PROTOCOLS. THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
EASE
 WAS AS A RESULT
 OF THE CONNECTIONS WITH THE FELLOW STARDOM.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, BEEN KNOWN
ALSO
 ATTRACTS LOTS OF ATTENTION MAJORLY
 THE LIFESTYLE AS WELL
 AS BACKGROUND RESEARCH ON THE PAST You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
LIFE
 OF THESE EMINENT Possible spelling mistake found.Personalities
PERSONALTIES
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
LIFE
 INCOGNITO IS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE FOR PROMINENT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 OWING TO THE FACT THAT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 AROUND WILL ALWAYS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
MAKE
 FUSS AT THEIR PRESENCE EITHER WITH This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
GOOD
 OR This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
BAD
 INTENTIONS. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
OFTEN
 TIMES, HIGHLIGHT OF PLACES VISITED AND ATTIRES ARE PUBLISHED
 IN DAILY NEWS AS WELL
 AS SCANDALS. FOR INSTANCE
, THE WIFE OF A STATE GOVERNOR HAVING A SIDE TALK WITH ANOTHER This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
MAN
. SUCH CAPTION AS THIS ARE TARGETED
 TO EXPOSE THEIR LIFESTYLE.

IN ADDITION
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
THINK
 FAME IS DESIRABLE AS IT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
ALLOWS
 FOR EXQUISITE AND EXCLUSIVE STANDARD OF LIVING IF THE ATTENTIONS AND ATTRACTIONS CAN BE MINIMIZED
. HUMAN ACTIVITIES AND LIFESTYLE SHOULD NOT BE PUBLISHED
 WITHOUT BEING PERMITTED
 BY THE CONCERNED PERSON.

CONCLUSIVELY
, THE BENEFICIAL AND ADVERSE EFFECT OF PROMINENCE SHOULD BE WELL CONSIDERED PRIOR TO TAKE THE PATH OF FAME AS ONE MIGHT OUTWEIGH THE OTHER. 