Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many people believes that it would be benefit for the students to spending sometimes away from studying between high school and university.

Many people believes that it would be benefit for the students to spending sometimes away from studying between high school and university. Lx86
Many people convinced that it would be beneficial for the children to pay out some time apart from study in the middle of high school and university. To commence with, there are some reasons of why students should have a time gap from high school to university. The predominant reasons are firstly, it reduces the stress of study. Thus, the students generlly study from previous many years. It gives them relieve from this burden. It's also provides sufficient time to children put searching for the employment which helps to boost their skills such as; team work, leadership, communication and time management and to be them independent. Their are able to find the new opportunities in life and understand the life in real sense. Apart from this works experience give an idea to teenagers to find the area of study in which they are most interested. On the contrary, there are multiple causes that's why it would be not favorable for people to spend their time away from study during this time period. The dominant reason is that they loss their focus and concentration and due to the lack of interest may students gives up from the study. It is very difficult for such students to find out valuable jobs. They lives at low pay scales for entries lives. The time gap can have a negetive impact on their resume when they will apply for a job. Conclusion: - However, both have a equal importance. It may various upon people to people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
convinced that it would be beneficial for the children to pay out
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
apart from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in the middle of high school and university. To commence with, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reasons of why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
should have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
gap from high school to university. The predominant reasons are
firstly
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduces
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
.
Thus
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
Possible spelling mistake found.
generlly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
from previous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
years. It gives them relieve from this burden. It's
also
provides sufficient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to children put searching for the employment which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to boost their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
such as; team work, leadership, communication and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
management and to be them independent.
Did you mean "there"?
Their
are able to find the new opportunities in life and understand the life in real sense. Apart from this works experience give an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
to find the area of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in which they are most interested.
On the contrary
, there are multiple causes that's why it would be not favorable for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to spend their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
away from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
during this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
period. The dominant reason is that they
Did you mean "lost" (past tense of the verb 'lose')?
loss
their focus and concentration and due to the lack of interest may
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
gives up from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult for such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to find out valuable jobs. They
The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "live"
lives
at low pay scales for entries
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
gap can have a
Possible spelling mistake found.
negetive
impact on their resume when they will apply for a job. Conclusion:
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
However
, both have
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
equal importance. It
It seems that a verb or adverb has been misspelled or is missing here.
may various
upon
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
people
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Many people believes that it would be benefit for the students to spending sometimes away from studying between high school and university.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts