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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

When the conscious of protection of the nature had been increase, the meaning of the animal protection has taken into account. The all we could know is that how to use proper ways to cover the possible solution to process the whole. As a result, the tactics always be judged by most of the public and Government. The Zoo had been cover lots of different elements which could affect animal life, even citizens daily life. However, the well-being of the animals should be concern when the zoo has been cover by the detection of conservative people who believe that the all species has right to live on the earth. Knowing is totally various from handling the truth. In fact, public always do not concern the other animal's life once they do not want to discover the influence by whole ecosystem. But as the time goes by, they get the reality is interfered the most of the life except human species, they would start to pay attention on the the whole systems. Our daily resources is given by the nature world and if we could not keep the environment in good condition, the consequence would be hard to recover and the crucial way to convey serious damage which human seldom discovered in daily world.
When the conscious of protection of the nature had been increase, the meaning of the animal protection has taken into account. The all we could know is that how to
use
proper ways to cover the possible solution to process the whole.
As a result
, the tactics always
be judged
by most of the public and
Government
. The Zoo had been cover lots of
different
elements which could affect animal
life
, even citizens daily
life
.
However
, the well-being of the animals should be concern when the zoo has been cover by the detection of conservative
people
who believe that the all species has right to
live
on the earth. Knowing is
totally
various from handling the truth. In fact, public always do not concern the other animal's
life
once they do not want to discover the influence by whole ecosystem.
But
as the time goes by, they
get
the reality
is interfered
the most of the
life
except human species, they would
start
to pay attention on
the the
whole systems. Our daily resources is
given
by the nature world and if we could not
keep
the environment in
good
condition, the consequence would be
hard
to recover and the crucial way to convey serious damage which human seldom discovered in daily world.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

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