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Many people believe that there is a lot of benefits of tourism but some people believe that there is only disadvantages

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Nowadays tourism very developed. There is great opportunity for tourists. At the moment transport is too very developed so tourists can go anywhere in any transport. Let's see benefits of tourism. There is many advantages of tourism. The number of workplaces created by tourism. There is big benefit to Country. Tourists can see a lot of historical places. Its beneficial for Economy. National and spiritual knowledge of people will increase through tourism. Develops the infrastructures of a country, and plants a sense of cultural exchange between foreigners and citizens.
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. The number of workplaces created by
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. Develops the infrastructures of a country, and plants a sense of cultural exchange between foreigners and citizens.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that there is a lot of benefits of tourism but some people believe that there is only disadvantages

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  American English
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