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Many people believe that the world’s most urgent problem can only be solved by international collaboration. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the world’s most urgent problem can only be solved by international collaboration. pwld
It is argued by several individual that the planet’s significant issue ought to be resolved only through international collaboration. I strongly agree with this statement and believe that any type of problem can be mitigate with co operation between the nations. To embark on, there are several benefits of international collaboration. Because of the collaboration a lot of countries are able to resolve terrorist issue. A large number of nations are facing terrorism issue and have face huge challenge to fight against them. Countries like india, Pakistan, Iraq is a prime example where large number of people die due to terrorist attack. To tackle the problem all the nations around the world should unite together. Every nations should aid financially and emotionally to other countries who are having these issue. The other issue is a lot of nations in recent time are facing corona virus pandemic, because of the corona virus outbreak large number of people around the world are died. Furthermore, several scientists are undergoing research to find right vaccine to fight against diseases. To fight against the virus many countries has come together, and has helped developing countries with necessary medical equipment. For instance, Indian has supplied millions of AstraZeneca vaccine to many parts of the world to prevent spread of corona virus. On the other hand, the biggest challenge is global warming, which is the problem of whole world. Due to the human behavior like deforestation, overpopulation, pollution, the number green house gases like co2, methane is increasing which trapped the heat and this rise the temperature of earth causing climate change, as a result, the earth is experiencing major problems like flood, tsunami, hurricanes and tornados. To solve the problem of global warming many countries has come together and created public campaign and awareness all around the world. This is not the problem of a single country so every country should come together to control the green house gases and protect environment. In conclusion, there are other major issue in the world and these problem could be combat if there is cooperation among countries and have a single agenda to solve these problem then only the planet will be safe other wise we could face many problems.
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by several individual that the planet’s significant
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ought to
be resolved
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only
through international collaboration. I
strongly
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agree
with this statement and believe that any type of
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problem
can be
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mitigate
with
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co operation
between the nations.

To embark on, there are several benefits of international collaboration.
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of the collaboration
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a lot of
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countries
are able to resolve terrorist
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issue
. A large
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number
of
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nations
are facing terrorism
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issue
and have
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face
huge challenge to fight against them.
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india
, Pakistan, Iraq is a prime example where large
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of
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people
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die
due to terrorist attack. To tackle the
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problem
all the
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nations
around the
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world
should unite together. Every
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nations
should aid
financially
and
emotionally
to
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other
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countries
who are having these
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. The
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is
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nations
in recent time are facing
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because
of the
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corona virus
outbreak large
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number
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people
around the
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has
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together, and has
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helped
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countries
with necessary medical equipment.
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parts of the
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to
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spread of
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corona virus
.

On the
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other
hand, the biggest challenge is global warming, which is the
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of whole
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world
. Due to the human behavior like deforestation, overpopulation, pollution, the
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number
green
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gases like co2, methane is increasing which trapped the heat and this rise the temperature of earth causing climate
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change
,
as a result
, the earth is experiencing major
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problems
like flood, tsunami, hurricanes and tornados. To solve the
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problem
of global warming
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has
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come
together and created public campaign and awareness all around the
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world
. This is not the
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country
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every
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should
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come
together to control the green
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gases and protect environment.

In conclusion
, there are
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other
major
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issue
in the
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world
and these
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problem
could be combat if there is cooperation among
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countries
and have a single agenda to solve these
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problem
then
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only
the planet will be safe
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we could face
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IELTS essay Many people believe that the world’s most urgent problem can only be solved by international collaboration.

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4 paragraphs
371 words
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