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many people believe that the tourist should follow the local customs while others disagree and say that at host country should value the cultural gap discuss both the views and give your opinion

many people believe that the tourist should follow the local customs while others disagree and say that at host country should value the cultural gap discuss both the views and give your opinion BMLgw
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it will lead to growth of tourism industry as
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more put a visit to such
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with humble fox and carefree environment.
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IELTS essay many people believe that the tourist should follow the local customs while others disagree and say that at host country should value the cultural gap discuss both the views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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