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My story of daily routine activities

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Today evening, my close friend and me went to roam on the roads. Eventhough lock down imposed, we went on. There was a reason bebind this. We got bored by sitting hours and hours at home, so we decided to get the vehicle for roaming. At last he came to me by vehille and we moved. I started to ride the vehicle as he was tired of doing his duty all day long. I rode the vehicle to the railway station road since the police were patrolling on main reads. Finally, we reached there and got the vehicle parked. We started walking for sometime on barefoot. What we both found was a clutch of people were walking and performing some kind of exercises there. They seemed to be sugur patients. Since then, we decided that not to get suffered from these kind of health Problems, such as; Sugar, Blood pressure, etc. After performing what we wanted to do there, we returned to home. I thought to myself for a moment and I recalled a proverb. "Prevention is better than cure! !

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Today evening
, my close friend and me went to roam on the roads. Possible spelling mistake found.Even though
Eventhough
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so
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get
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vehicle
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last he
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moved
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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vehicle
 as he was tired
 of doing his duty all day long. I rode the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicle
 to the railway station road since the police were patrolling on main reads.

Finally
, we reached there and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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vehicle
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started
 walking for sometime on barefoot. What we both found was a clutch of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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some
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sugur
 patients.

Since then, we decided that not to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 suffered from Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?this kindthese kinds
these kind
 of health Problems, such as; Sugar, Blood pressure, etc.

After performing what we wanted to do there, we returned to home. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 to myself for a moment and I recalled a proverb.

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Prevention is better than cure! ! 