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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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social networking sites is fucking required in modern world. Social networking sites are a great platform for people to connect with their loved ones. It helps in increasing communication and making connections with people all over the world. Although people believe that social networking sites are harmful, they are also very beneficial. Social networking sites are everywhere now. In other words, they have taken over almost every sphere of life. They come with both, advantages as well as disadvantages. If we talk about the educational field, these sites enhance education by having an influence on the learners. They can explore various topics for their projects. Furthermore, the business field benefits a lot from social networking sites. The companies use social networking sites to connect better with their potential clients and business partners. Moreover, people in search of jobs use the sites to connect better with employers and firms. This gives them a great opportunity to seek better jobs. On the other hand, the disadvantages of social networking sites are also very high. They give birth to cybercrimes like cyberbullying, sexual exploitation, money scams and more. It is very harmful to kids as people make them victims of pornography and more. It also gives easy access to the pedophiles of children’s information. Most importantly, social networking sites are very addictive. They drop the productivity levels of people. Students waste their time using it and get distracted easily from their studies. Moreover, it makes them inactive and limits their physical activities.
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enhance education by having an influence on the learners. They can explore various topics for their projects.

Furthermore
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networking
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. The
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companies
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to connect better with their potential clients and business partners.
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,
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in search of jobs
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to connect better with employers and firms. This gives them a great opportunity to seek better jobs.

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networking
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high. They give birth to
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cybercrimes
like cyberbullying, sexual exploitation, money scams and more. It is
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harmful to kids as
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make
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gives easy access to the pedophiles of children’s information.

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addictive. They drop the productivity levels of
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. Students waste their time using it and
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easily
from their studies.
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, it
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makes
them inactive and limits their physical activities.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

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