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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task.

Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. mXjJ8
Nowadays, people have to pursue more than one language to be able to communicate with the world. Many people stress that the important task is to learn a language other than the mother tongue. However, I believe it depends on the person and how they learn it. First, there are a number of reasons why this is harder. Firstly, the learning environment will be an important cause that people face. For example, when someone is trying to learn a foreign language but he or she has no one to practice with, it will be very difficult to master. Second, it's difficult when people can't find materials to learn and promote. For example, when they do not find the right materials, they will lead to learning the wrong method. On the other hand, those who have a passion for a certain language need a great deal of effort. People need to interact with native speakers through online communities and social media. In addition, they must be familiar with the language as much as possible. Besides, studying with people around will be a possible way to become fluent in the language. At first this was the hardest thing for me because I had to communicate in English, but when I focused on it and put all my efforts into it, I started to grow. In conclusion, according to some people, foreign languages ​​are difficult to learn. In my opinion, if we learn it properly and know how to apply it, we will overcome it easily.
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other than the mother tongue.
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, the learning environment will be an
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he or she has no one to practice with, it will be
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difficult to master. Second, it's difficult when
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people
can't find materials to
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learn
and promote.
For example
, when they do not find the right materials, they will lead to learning the
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wrong
method.

On the other hand
, those who have a passion for a certain
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language
need a great deal of effort.
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People
need to interact with native speakers through online communities and social media.
In addition
, they
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must
be familiar with the
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language
as much as possible.
Besides
, studying with
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people
around will be a possible way to become fluent in the
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language
. At
first
this was the hardest thing for me
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because
I had to communicate in English,
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but
when I focused on it and put all my efforts into it, I
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started
to grow.

In conclusion
, according to
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people
, foreign
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languages
​​are difficult to
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. In my opinion, if we
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it
properly
and know how to apply it, we will overcome it
easily
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IELTS essay Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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