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In this essay, I will be discussing the pros and cons of the enormous impact of social media.

In this essay, I will be discussing the pros and cons of the enormous impact of social media. n1OQl
There is no doubt that our life is submerged in the media's influence these days. Some people believe that the multi-media society opens up a variety of valuable benefits, while others argue that it also has several drawbacks. In this essay, I will be discussing the pros and cons of the enormous impact of social media. On the one hand, it can be said that multi-media has several substantial upsides, including the accessibility of information and communication. First of all, one of the benefits of media influence is the quick approach to various sources we need. Due to contemporary technology, we find it not difficult to figure out what is going on around the globe. Secondly, it is evident that social media is considered a convenient means of communication in the age of modernity. Nowadays, by dint of the booming of social media, people have numerous favorable conditions for making friends as well as cultural assimilation. For instance, it is effortless to find people with the same interests through a variety of forums and social groups on the Internet. Turning to the other side of the argument, despite these aforementioned benefits, several drawbacks do exist. The initial drawback is the existence of fake news available on most social platforms. Due to the overwhelming information on social media, which is sometimes unreliable, we might be misleading and not be aware of the right thing. In particular, false information regarding methods to increase crop yield in newspapers has lately caused significant losses and damages to many farmers. Another downside of a media-rich society is the lack of real-life communication. It is a fact that interacting with people online often makes the process simpler. Therefore, people have a tendency to want to interact with each other through social media, which leads to many detrimental impacts on our face-to-face relationships. In general, these obstacles may have a massive effect on your well-being in the long run. In conclusion, while there are several positive outcomes of socializing online, humans, in general, should be conscious of the detriments of social media.
There is no doubt that our life
is submerged
in the media's influence these days.
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Some
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people
believe that the multi-media society opens up a variety of valuable benefits, while others argue that it
also
has several drawbacks. In this essay, I will be discussing the pros and cons of the enormous impact of
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social
media.

On the one hand, it can
be said
that multi-media has several substantial upsides, including the accessibility of information and communication.
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First of all
, one of the benefits of
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media
influence is the quick approach to various sources we need. Due to contemporary technology, we find it not difficult to figure out what is going on around the globe.
Secondly
, it is evident that
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social
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media
is considered
a convenient means of communication in the age of modernity. Nowadays, by dint of the booming of
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social
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media
,
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people
have numerous favorable conditions for making friends
as well
as cultural assimilation.
For instance
, it is effortless to find
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people
with the same interests through a variety of forums and
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social
groups on the Internet.

Turning to the other side of the argument, despite these aforementioned benefits, several drawbacks do exist. The initial drawback is the existence of fake news available on most
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social
platforms. Due to the overwhelming information on
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social
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media
, which is
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sometimes
unreliable, we might be misleading and not be aware of the right thing.
In particular
, false information regarding methods to increase crop yield in newspapers has lately caused significant losses and damages to
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many
farmers. Another downside of a media-rich society is the lack of real-life communication. It is a fact that interacting with
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people
online
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often
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makes
the process simpler.
Therefore
,
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people
have a tendency to want to interact with each other through
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social
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media
, which leads to
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many
detrimental impacts on our face-to-face relationships.
In general
, these obstacles may have a massive effect on your well-being in the long run.

In conclusion
, while there are several
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positive
outcomes of socializing online, humans,
in general
, should be conscious of the detriments of
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social
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media
.
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IELTS essay In this essay, I will be discussing the pros and cons of the enormous impact of social media.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
345 words
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