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Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie? Explain your answer giving reasons and specific examples. v.3

Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie? Explain your answer giving reasons and specific examples. v. 3
The majority of people have a belief that we will be always speaking true in our society. In my opinion, we can skip telling a truth to others for being a good communication with them. Unfortunately, it has both pros and cons on both statements. In this essay, I will illustrate with relevant examples to elaborate further. To be honest, it is not an easy to tell the facts all the times in society. While speaking genuine, you may face struggles at initial phases. But, in future you will have a better relationship with each of us. In addition, we never feel any guilty inside when you are honest. Furthermore, people will also appreciate your loyalty. For example, we have to be truthful to all my friends and family, which built trust in their heart. Because, you are with them in the whole life. Even though it hurts us will loyal to them. However, telling a truth is going to be risky at some times. Certainly, we have to lie to escape on critical situations. Moreover, to make others happy you will speak lie on certain situations. For instance, Office is not the safest environment to speak facts on every-time. It builds a negative impression with staff, which effects badly on your work. At certain times, you have to skip to make healthy and prosper interaction to all our colleagues. In conclusion, I would like to say that we have to speak truth with our well-wishers such as friends, relatives etc. At the same time, you can speak lies with strangers. End of the day, you have to maintain good and healthy relationship to each and everyone.
The majority of
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people
have a belief that we will be always speaking true in our society. In my opinion, we can skip telling a truth to others for being a
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good
communication with them. Unfortunately, it has both pros and cons on both statements. In this essay, I will illustrate with relevant examples to elaborate
further
.

To be honest, it is not an easy to
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tell
the facts all the
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times
in society. While speaking genuine, you may face struggles at initial phases.
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But
, in future you will have a better relationship with each of us.
In addition
, we never feel any guilty inside when you are honest.
Furthermore
,
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people
will
also
appreciate your loyalty.
For example
, we
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have to
be truthful to all my friends and family, which built trust in their heart.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
, you are with them in the whole life.
“Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
it hurts us
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will loyal
to them.

However
, telling a truth is going to be risky at
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some
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times
.
Certainly
, we
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have to
lie to escape on critical situations.
Moreover
, to
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make
others happy you will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speak
lie on certain situations.
For instance
, Office is not the safest environment to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speak
facts on every-time. It builds a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impression with staff, which effects
badly
on your work. At certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
, you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
skip to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
healthy and prosper interaction to all our colleagues.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that we
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have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speak
truth with our well-wishers such as friends, relatives etc. At the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, you can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speak
lies with strangers.
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End
of the day, you
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have to
maintain
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good
and healthy relationship to each and
Did you mean "every one"?
everyone
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie? Explain your answer giving reasons and specific examples. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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