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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions

Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions 0N1B
Health is a common concern for modern people. Many believe that it is more straightforward to live healthily in the countryside while others maintain that living in a metropolitan area can benefit health. A closer look at the issue will help in assessing these views. Undoubtedly, it is much simpler to live a healthy life in non-urban areas. First, the smaller number of people means the environment is cleaner, which can positively affect people's health. Indeed, many resorts and treatment facilities are explicitly built in areas far away from large cities. Furthermore, the slower pace of living and wider open spaces in the countryside provides a lot more chances to exercise. A personal example would be the fact that it would take me an hour to drive to the nearest hiking location now that I am living near the city center, while I could go hiking a lot more frequently when I was living in the countryside last year. Thus, I would argue that having a healthy lifestyle in the countryside is easier. Many argue that city life is beneficial for people's health. Firstly, while there are fewer natural places for exercising, the number of fitness centers more than make up for this shortcoming. In addition, living in the city also gives people easier access to health services like regular health check-ups, which can help them detect serious illness early and potentially save their lives. However, the city's pollution is detrimental to physical well-being, and the large number of people and the fast pace of life always bring stress that harms their mental health. The exercise and health services might not be able to outweigh this adverse effect. Therefore, I believe that while there are benefits, life in the city is more harmful. In conclusion, in my view, it is indeed simpler to live a healthy life in the country. On the other hand, living in the city life does have its advantages, but the drawbacks can be more significant.
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while others maintain that
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in a metropolitan area can benefit
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health
. A closer look at the issue will
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help
in assessing these views.

Undoubtedly
, it is much simpler to
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live
a healthy
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life
in non-urban areas.
First
, the smaller number of
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people
means the environment is cleaner, which can
positively
affect
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people
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health
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Indeed
,
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resorts and treatment facilities are
explicitly
built in areas far away from large
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cities
.
Furthermore
, the slower pace of
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living
and wider open spaces in the
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countryside
provides a lot more chances to exercise. A personal example would be the fact that it would take me an hour to drive to the nearest hiking location
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now
that I am
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living
near the city center, while I could go hiking a lot more
frequently
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living
in the
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last year.
Thus
, I would argue that having a healthy lifestyle in the
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countryside
is easier.

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up for this shortcoming.
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gives
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easier access to
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services like regular
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health
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-ups, which can
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them detect serious illness early and
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However
, the city's pollution is detrimental to physical well-being, and the large number of
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always bring
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stress
that harms their mental
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health
. The exercise and
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health
services might not be able to outweigh this adverse effect.
Therefore
, I believe that while there are benefits,
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life
in the city is more harmful.

In conclusion
, in my view, it is
indeed
simpler to
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a healthy
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life
in the country.
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,
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living
in the city
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life
does have its advantages,
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the drawbacks can be more significant.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions

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