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Many people believe that globalisation has had a positive impact on the modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that these days the phenomenon of globalization increases communication between people around the world. Some people claim that globalization has had a dramatic positive effect on our life. I am completely agree with this opinion. One impact of globalization is vanishing of some traditional culture which was followed by people blindly. To illustrate, people were trapped in their cultures before having the internet in their homes. For example, Saudi families were deprived from education in the past as a custom that learning only for men and the women responsibilities limited on raising of children, however online learning and scholarship abroad programs have had influenced on Saudi culture, which forced students to live in a vastly different environment from home country, they returned with new ideas as a part of their personality and that lead to cultural changes in Saudi families and now they encourage their daughters’ education. In other words, globalization assist in exploring and exchanging cultures easily which reflect on their behavior and lifestyles. Another great consequence of globalization is the facilitation of cooperation between nations to solve global issues. For instance, the entire world is now working together to find cures for the pandemic COVID-19. Moreover, the World Health Organization (WHO) relies entirely on global data collocation to standardized an international protocols for any disease. These mean, without globalization we will not achieve the health we have today. In conclusion, globalization affect our lives, cultures and health. The scale of the benefits that we gain from globalization is greater than damages, that is why I am totally agree that globalization has had positive effect on the world.

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