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Many people believe that global environmental problems should be dealt with internationally rather than domestically. What is your opinion?

Many people believe that global environmental problems should be dealt with internationally rather than domestically. What is your opinion? g5Ao1
It is unquestionable that the rise of international environmental dilemmas is one of the most concerning problems nowadays which is divided into two different views. While some people believe that these problems should be coped with each separate country, I have more faith in the opposite idea that it is much better to cooperate among countries to solve global natural issues. It is worth considering the opinion about dealing with pollution problems in each individual country on the ground that every nation has a variety of environmental issues; thus they will have its own environmental protection policies available to them. As an example, the major problems related to the environment in Vietnam is about the air and water pollution, whereas the similar in some Western countries is forest fires. Nevertheless, the fact that developing countries have been facing various financial difficulties related to solving environmental problems, such as equipping modern tools and spending for campaigns relevant to protecting the surroundings. As far as I am concerned, it is international collaboration which is an effective and feasible solution to giving hands to solve universal pollution problems in order to reduce trouble in some developing countries. To begin with, having a leadership is of great benefit unless all countries do not agree to collaborate with each other. By doing so, an international organization which is on behalf of all nations to encourage partnership in caring for the environment by inspiring, informing, and enabling peoples to enhance their quality of life. Under this circumstance, each country is able to receive the availability of support ranging from money, equipment, experience and so on when attending to this cooperation. Furthermore, it is international scale rather than domestically one which is influenced by all negative effects of environmental problems. Hence, despite living in different areas, people are still affected by pollution issues from their neighbouring countries, so it is vital to recognise that collaborating to reduce surroundings problems not only protect one country's citizens and environment but also for the others. In conclusion, the fact that domestic attempts are completely critical, but cooperating all countries to work together to solve global environmental problems takes up much more importance. In this sense, this action will bring a clean and healthy environment to all people over the world.
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international
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environmental
dilemmas is one of the most concerning
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problems
nowadays which
is divided
into two
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different
views. While
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some
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people
believe that these
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problems
should
be coped
with each separate
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country
, I have more faith in the opposite
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idea
that it is much better to cooperate among
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countries
to solve global natural issues.

It is worth considering the opinion about dealing with
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pollution
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problems
in each individual
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country
on the ground that every nation has a variety of
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environmental
issues;
thus
they will have its
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own
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environmental
protection policies available to them. As an example, the major
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problems
related to the
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environment
in Vietnam is about the air and water
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pollution
, whereas the similar in
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some
Western
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countries
is forest fires.
Nevertheless
, the fact that developing
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countries
have been facing various financial difficulties related to solving
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environmental
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problems
, such as equipping modern tools and spending for campaigns relevant to protecting the surroundings.

As far as I
am concerned
, it is
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international
collaboration which is an effective and feasible solution to giving hands to solve universal
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pollution
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problems
in order to
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reduce
trouble in
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some
developing
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countries
. To
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begin
with, having a leadership is of great benefit unless all
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countries
do not
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agree
to collaborate with each other. By doing
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so
, an
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international
organization which is on behalf of all nations to encourage partnership in caring for the
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environment
by inspiring, informing, and enabling
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peoples
to enhance their quality of life. Under this circumstance, each
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country
is able to receive the availability of support ranging from money, equipment, experience and
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so
on when attending to this cooperation.
Furthermore
, it is
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international
scale
rather
than
domestically
one which
is influenced
by all
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negative
effects of
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environmental
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problems
.
Hence
, despite living in
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different
areas,
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people
are
still
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affected
by
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pollution
issues from their
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neighbouring
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countries
,
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so
it is vital to
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recognise
that collaborating to
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reduce
surroundings
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problems
not
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only
protect one country's citizens and
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environment
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but
also
for the others.

In conclusion
, the fact that domestic attempts are completely critical,
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but
cooperating all
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countries
to work together to solve global
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environmental
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problems
takes up much more importance. In this sense, this action will bring a clean and healthy
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environment
to all
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people
over the world.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that global environmental problems should be dealt with internationally rather than domestically. What is your opinion?

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