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many people believe that formal exams are not the best way of assessing

many people believe that formal exams are not the best way of assessing 6NQmK
It is often thought by a huge group of people that a paper based exam is not the most significant technique of testing an educational improvement. In my point of view, I believe that the formal way of examination is not effective. First of all, the handwriting is sometimes difficult to read. This is because every person is writing in their own unique way. Moreover, a handwriting is not improving as well, even if you try your best to change it. It is something that is engaged with the personality of a person. For example, it can be seen that girls are able to write in a neat way, whereas boys do have a problem with writing. All in all, understanding the answer sheets by the teachers will be a bit harder by assessing the papers. Secondly, during a test it is not possible to erase your answers. The reason for this is that a large amount of the exams is taken by pen instead of a pencil. For instance, making changes in an essay will be impossible or harder. Furthermore, you also need to make sure that everything is legible. So that's why it is a negative way to make an exam on a paper. To conclude, a lot of the inhabitants believe that the formal way of examination is not more relevant to examine educational papers. In my opinion, I totally agree with this, because there are moment that the handwriting is complicated to understand. Furthermore, there is no possibility to remove your wrong answer.
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by a huge group of
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that a paper based exam is not the most significant technique of testing an educational improvement. In my point of view, I believe that the formal way of examination is not effective.

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First of all
, the handwriting is
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sometimes
difficult to read. This is
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because
every person is writing in their
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own
unique way.
Moreover
, a handwriting is not improving
as well
, even if you try your best to
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change
it. It is something that
is engaged
with the personality of a person.
For example
, it can be
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seen
that girls are able to write
Consider replacing "in a neat way" with the adverb for "neat"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a neat way
, whereas boys do have a problem with writing. All in all, understanding the answer sheets by the teachers will be a bit harder by assessing the papers.

Secondly
, during a
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test
it is not possible to erase your answers.
The reason for this is
that a large amount of the exams
is taken
by pen
instead
of a pencil.
For instance
, making
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changes
in an essay will be impossible or harder.
Furthermore
, you
also
need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that everything is legible.
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that's why it is a
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negative
way to
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make
an exam on a paper.

To conclude
,
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a lot of
the inhabitants believe that the formal way of examination is not more relevant to examine educational papers. In my opinion, I
totally
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agree
with this,
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because
there are moment that the handwriting
is complicated
to understand.
Furthermore
, there is no possibility to remove your
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wrong
answer.
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IELTS essay many people believe that formal exams are not the best way of assessing

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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