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Many people believe that education and high qualifications will bring success. Others think that it’s not required to achieve success in life. Discuss both views and give your opinion v.1

Many people believe that education and high qualifications will bring success. Others think that it’s not required to achieve success in life. 1
In the contemporary era, there have different views regarding being a successful person. Some people deem that the various types of knowledge play a crucial role in success, while another group of people argue with this statement and say that education is not necessary to take success in life. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this phenomenon before reaching my own opinion Adequate evidence is obtainable to substantiate for this concept of the role of education in successful people. The top-notch concrete reason is that education is one key, which used perfectly by people in their life, so the person can be solved all inimical and patronize problem with taking less time. For example, the top ten richest people in the world who said that they achieved success in their life because all these persons get up better quality education in their childhood. Thus, it is understandable why many uphold the argument that more emphasis should be put on studying In spite of all argument, some people strongly believed that skill substantial to gating success. In other words, in the fast-moving world, all the companies around the world needed to skill full person for the increasing value of their company. For illustration, the world best economics is RATLSDI PSCH from the United States, in their childhood, they could not study, due to that he belongs to the poor class family. It makes clear that why manifold people agree with skills are the best part of taking success. Agglomerating, all the points of elaborated above, it can be concluded that the education and skills both are patronized to being a successful person
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deem that the various types of knowledge play a crucial role in
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, while another group of
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argue with this statement and say that
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success
in life. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this phenomenon
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Adequate evidence is obtainable to substantiate for this concept of the role of
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education
in successful
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people
. The top-notch concrete reason is that
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is one key, which
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used
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people
in their life,
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can
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all inimical and patronize problem with taking less time.
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, the top ten richest
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in the
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who said that they achieved
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in their life
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strongly
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substantial to gating
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.
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fast
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world
, all the
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companies
around the
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needed to
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skill
full
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person
for the increasing value of their
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company
. For illustration, the
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best economics is
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from the United States, in their childhood, they could not study, due to that he belongs to the poor
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are the best part of taking success.

Agglomerating, all the points of elaborated above, it can
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that the
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education
and
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both
are patronized
to being a successful
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person
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay Many people believe that education and high qualifications will bring success. Others think that it’s not required to achieve success in life. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
273 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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