Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Many people believe that cigarette smoking has had a negative impact for far too long and the only solution to end ot, is to make cigarettes illegall worldwide. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples to support your opinion.

Many people believe that cigarette smoking has had a negative impact for far too long and the only solution to end ot, is to make cigarettes illegall worldwide. Give explanations and examples to support your opinion. BJp5w

The cigarette is a common bad nature for many people in our society. This ever - increasing bad habit can cause detrimental effects to the respiratory, not only smokers, but also for surrounding people as they inhale the smoke coming out of cigarettes. The cancer rate has been increased due to the cigarette and governments in many countries ought to ban smoking. I partially agree with this notion because it is a feasible solution to combat all the negative impacts caused by this bad habit, however this technique can destruct the economy. It is considered, that the best process to end this nature is to make it illegal. Implementing this law, people would fear to sell or buy cigarettes because of the imposition of a fine or even the jail. For example, in many countries which are ceasing to ban smoking, offenders who trade or smoke a cigarette will either pay a fine of 600 dollars or go to prison for one month. However, this process may have negative impacts for the economy. A sudden on ban of smoking would lead to the increase rate of poverty and unemployment. Many cigarette companies would go bankrupt and millions of people worldwide would lose their jobs. Moreover, this style may increase the criminality rate, the illegal actions and people would financially suffer. For instance, individuals who their income is depending from the smoking, trade may decide to become illegal dealers in order to sustain his standard of living. This action definitely jeopardizes their freedom. Therefore, banning cigarettes may not be the best solution. To conclude, making the crop illegal that would definitely help with premature death and decreasing the cancer risk. Nevertheless, this might not be the best resolve as this recipe, would cause negative impacts to the society. As such, it is worth considering other options before implementing such drastic measures.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmoke
cigarette
 is a common This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 nature for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in our society. This ever Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 increasing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habit can cause detrimental effects to the respiratory, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 smokers, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 for surrounding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 as they inhale the smoke coming out of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmoke
cigarettes
. The cancer rate has been increased
 due to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmoke
cigarette
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 countries ought to ban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
. I partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this notion This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is a feasible solution to combat all the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impacts caused by this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habit, however
 this technique can destruct the economy.

It is considered
, that the best process to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 this nature is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withunwarrantedwrongfulirregularunauthorizedbannedunconstitutional
illegal
. Implementing this law, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 would fear to sell or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmoke
cigarettes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the imposition of a fine or even the jail. For example
, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 countries which are ceasing to ban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
, offenders who trade or smoke a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmoke
cigarette
 will either pay a fine of 600 dollars or go to prison for one month. However
, this process may have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impacts for the economy.

A sudden on ban of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
 would lead to the increase rate of poverty and unemployment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmoke
cigarette
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 would go bankrupt and millions of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 worldwide would lose their jobs. Moreover
, this style may increase the criminality rate, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withunwarrantedwrongfulirregularunauthorizedbannedunconstitutional
illegal
 actions and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 would financially
 suffer. For instance
, individuals who their income The verb 'depending' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is depending
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
, trade may decide to become You use this word too often, consider replacing it withunwarrantedwrongfulirregularunauthorizedbannedunconstitutional
illegal
 dealers in order to sustain his standard of living. This action definitely jeopardizes their freedom. Therefore
, banning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmoke
cigarettes
 may not be the best solution.

To conclude
, making the crop You use this word too often, consider replacing it withunwarrantedwrongfulirregularunauthorizedbannedunconstitutional
illegal
 that would definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 with premature death and decreasing the cancer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
. Nevertheless
, this might not be the best resolve as this recipe, would cause This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impacts to the society. As such, it is worth considering other options This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 implementing such drastic measures. 