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Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?

The famous proverb “Health is wealth” we are listening from our childhood so we need to preserve our health. But in today’s generation, lifestyle is changing a lot several kinds of foodstuff are affecting our health and result into many problems. I partially agree that the unhealthy eatable is only the soul reason for so many problem in our body, there are some others factors also which contribute the health fitness. The primary reason that making the food unhealthy is the harmful chemical ingredients that are use which lead to so many problem. As packaged food contain high amount of cholesterols, sugars, preservatives and coloring agents which are difficult to digest. One should think the purpose of having food which is lost somewhere, they are having food just to satisfying there taste buds. This result in to fats deposition, obesity, heart attack, cancer. For example my little sister she started eating street foods every evening which lead to the formation of lump in stomach and she use to consume less water. Few months ago she faced unbearable pain in lower abdomen, after appendix operation the issue was resolved. Overall, young generation should avoid eating these foods. Other factors too contribute for the unhealthy lifestyle and its technology. It helped humans in many ways but at the same time it also affect humans body. Sedentary lifestyle is the main reason. Spending too much time on mobile phones, using multiple social media websites for chatting’s purpose. Many youngsters themselves spend several hours in their rooms with electronic gadgets which effects there visual power. This has led to a rise in their sitting time and less involvement in any physical activity outside the house. People are too lazy to go for morning walk or cycling, other reason could be their commitments in professional and personal life. In conclusion, I would like to say normal diet is only the key factor for our body fitness. This essay explains the reason the unhealthy life style and junk food is not only the one reasons that youngsters possess unhealthy habits, I think the advancement in technology and usage of social media could be the another major reason for unhealthy life style.
The
famous
proverb
“Health
is wealth” we are listening from our childhood
so
we need to preserve our
health
.
But
in
today
’s generation, lifestyle is changing a
lot
several kinds of foodstuff are affecting our
health
and result into
many
problems. I
partially
agree
that the
unhealthy
eatable is
only
the soul
reason
for
so
many problem
in our body, there are
some
others factors
also
which contribute the
health
fitness.

The primary
reason
that making the
food
unhealthy
is the harmful chemical ingredients that are
use
which lead to
so
many problem
. As packaged
food
contain high amount of
cholesterols
, sugars, preservatives and coloring agents which are difficult to digest. One should
think
the purpose of having
food
which
is lost
somewhere, they are having
food
just
to satisfying there taste buds. This result in to fats deposition, obesity, heart attack, cancer.
For example
my
little
sister she
started
eating street
foods
every evening which lead to the formation of lump in
stomach and
she
use to
consume less water. Few months ago she faced unbearable pain in lower abdomen, after appendix operation the issue
was resolved
.
Overall
, young generation should avoid eating these foods.

Other factors
too contribute
for the
unhealthy
lifestyle and its technology. It
helped
humans in
many
ways
but
at the same time it
also
affect
humans body. Sedentary lifestyle is the main
reason
. Spending too much time on mobile phones, using multiple social media websites for chatting’s purpose.
Many
youngsters themselves spend several hours in their rooms with electronic gadgets which effects there visual power. This has led to a rise in their sitting time and less involvement in any physical activity outside the
house
.
People
are too lazy to go for morning walk or cycling, other
reason
could be their commitments in professional and personal life.

In conclusion
, I would like to say normal diet is
only
the key factor for our body fitness. This essay
explains
the
reason
the
unhealthy
life style and junk
food
is not
only
the one
reasons
that youngsters possess
unhealthy
habits, I
think
the advancement in technology and usage of social media could be the another major
reason
for
unhealthy
life style.
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IELTS essay Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. that junk food is the cause of the issue?

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4 paragraphs
365 words
6.0
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