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- Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities?

- Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities? 1mnyy
These days’ people vastly adopt their lifestyle choosing well-known peoples fashion in magazine or TV. Apart from the reason of This temptation being discussed here, I believe that it is not a reasonable manner and will give my idea later. As a matter of fact, imitating celebrities from magazine or TV are one of the modern phenomenon which happens due t the several facts the two most important one will be written here. First, human being need to have a star or model to fallow and maintain his/her lifestyle based on that. Responding to this necessity, Celebrities are being followed by their fan from magazine or TV. Secondly, magazine or TV has the leadership of changing Lifestyle of Todays life and they do this by famous people way of living. All aspect of people manner are effected by these vast user-friendly instruments as a replacement to traditional way of relationship like café, whit these extraordinary publicity celebrities and TV programmer are joined together in order to gain more money. This changed the peoples to be fan of celebrities and copy theirs. Besides from discovering the reason of this trend, I admire to indicate this is a negative tempt. Human Created to be free from any inspiration and temptations and should decide about its future, wearing freely. Having Advertised vastly especially extravagant lifestyle of popular people, these tools replaced the people decision choice with themselves. So, Should People obey these ads or being neglected from society, the trend is negative. To conclude, Celebrities in magazine and TV are vastly deformed the lifestyle and people copy their style to cope with their needs of having a model. Apart from the power of these advertisement tools to inspire people to obey them, I believe that this is not a positive trend as making decision choice according to the TV or Magazine boss.
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people
vastly
adopt their
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lifestyle
choosing well-known
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peoples
fashion in
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magazine
or TV. Apart from the reason of This temptation
being discussed
here, I believe that it is not a reasonable manner and will give my
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idea
later.

As a matter of fact, imitating
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celebrities
from
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magazine
or TV are one of the modern phenomenon which happens due t the several facts the two most
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important
one will
be written
here.
First
, human
being need
to have a star or model to fallow and maintain his/her
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lifestyle
based on that. Responding to this necessity,
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Celebrities
are
being followed
by their fan from
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magazine
or TV.
Secondly
,
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magazine
or TV has the leadership of changing
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Lifestyle
of
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Todays
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life and
they do this by
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famous
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people
way of living. All aspect of
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people
manner
are effected
by these vast user-friendly instruments as a replacement to traditional way of relationship like café, whit these extraordinary publicity
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celebrities
and TV programmer are
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joined
together in order to gain more money. This
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changed
the
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peoples
to be
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fan
of
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celebrities
and copy theirs.

Besides
from discovering the reason of this trend, I admire to indicate this is a
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negative
tempt. Human Created to be free from any inspiration and temptations and should decide about its future, wearing
freely
. Having Advertised
vastly
especially
extravagant
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lifestyle
of popular
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people
, these tools replaced the
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people
decision choice with themselves.
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So
, Should
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People
obey these ads or
being neglected
from society, the trend is
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negative
.

To conclude
,
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Celebrities
in
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magazine
and TV are
vastly
deformed the
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lifestyle
and
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people
copy their style to cope with their needs of having a model. Apart from the power of these advertisement tools to inspire
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people
to obey them, I believe that this is not a
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positive
trend as making decision choice according to the TV or
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Magazine
boss.
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IELTS essay - Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities?

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