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many museum charge for admission while others are free

many museum charge for admission while others are free 95V8j

Museum is system of countries which is contained the history for each country some number of museum take charge in Their threshold while rest of the symbolic place could be visited with free of cost. If I think about the advantage following this statement, the benefits of charging do not outweigh the drawbacks because access permission should be necessary to account for the cost and government gets to intend for development though the support. I shall emerge my point of view in this paragraph. Firstly, it is certain that public show Their interest to visit the historical place by paying the ticket bills. However, children get chance to enhance the knowledge about museum, also parents willing to invest money for their kids. For example one of my cousin Shima, she try to give the best exploring life to her baby. Whenever she visited historical places her child wanted to know about more this particular tradition. So, it is apparent that this field is cognitive for them. Secondly, entrance fee helps the purpose of developments. Administrations try to establish according to fancy trend that are more acceptable in the community. For this reason, when it have processed authority lost their large amounts despite of visitors face is so many problems and their expectations would more and more. In contrast, some individuals do not assure their basic needs like shelter, food, clothes. How can they pay their fixed amounts? it's really difficult for them. Economical weaker does not show any kind of wish which would be luxurious. for instance Runa lives in a slum. She sells flowers which are made to help collecting some foods on daily basis. she have supported her family with difficulties. She does not realize to go anywhere. You sent Today at 2: 17 PM Taking everything into considerations, it seems to me that without money cannot bring better positions and also better collections in every corner of the Planet of globalization. when this project wants to reach many people and save the relics in specific location for better performance should be charged on this infrastructure.

Museum is system of countries which is contained
 the history for each country This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 number of museum take charge in Their threshold while rest of the symbolic place could be visited
 with free of cost. If I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about the advantage following this statement, the benefits of charging do not outweigh the drawbacks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 access permission should be necessary to account for the cost and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 to intend for development though the support. I shall emerge my point of view in this paragraph.

Firstly
, it is certain that public This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 Their interest to visit the historical place by paying the ticket bills. However
, children This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 chance to enhance the knowledge about museum, also
 parents willing to invest money for their kids. For example
 one of my cousin Possible spelling mistake found.ShivaShimShimsShi maShim aShia
Shima
, she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "tries", "tried".triestried
try
 to give the best exploring life to her baby. “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whenever
 she visited historical places her child wanted to know about more this particular tradition. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, it is apparent that this field is cognitive for them.

Secondly
, entrance fee This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 the purpose of developments. Administrations try to establish according to fancy trend that are more acceptable in the community. For this reason
, when it Did you mean "has"?has
have
 processed authority lost their large amounts Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?despite
despite of
 visitors face is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems and their expectations would more and more.

In contrast
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 individuals do not assure their basic needs like shelter, food, clothes. How can they pay their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 amounts? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
's really
 difficult for them.

Economical weaker does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 any kind of wish which would be luxurious. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 instance Possible spelling mistake found.RunRunsRNALunaTunaRune
Runa
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in a slum. She sells flowers which are made
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to collect" or "collect".to collectcollect
collecting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 foods on daily basis. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 supported her family with difficulties. She does not realize to go anywhere.

You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 at 2: 17 PM

Taking everything into considerations, it seems to me that without money cannot bring better positions and also
 better collections in every corner of the Planet of globalization. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 this project wants to reach This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and save the relics in specific location for better performance should be charged
 on this infrastructure. 