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many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays all work done by machines adv and disadv

many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays all work done by machines adv and disadv 1RWA
it is indeed that jobs are more convenient in every human life because due to employment person fulfill their basic needs. however, more work used to be finish at house by hands, yet in the present time an increasing number of them are done by gadgets i will discuss pros and cons. this essay will discuss in up coming paragraphs. To begin with, there are some points are mentioned merits of done work by using technical gadgets. firstly, in the present time mostly individual use equipment's for work due t this they save time because they done work easily as well as fastly with the help of machines. Secondly, if person use technical gadgets then they increase their ability and get knowledge about modern things. they learn different skills with the help of technology. on the other hand, ample points are mentioned demerits of using machines. firstly, if person done their machines. firstly, if person done their work by technical equipment then they tonally depend on it after that they become lethargic. Secondly, due to more use of technical obstacle because when they use machines than they do not do any physical work after they face health problems such as backpain, obesity many more. To conclude, before my pen down i would like to say that technical gadgets are give more benefit because due to it person do easily work yet it have also some drawbacks access use of anything is harmful for human healthh.
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it
is
indeed
that jobs are more convenient in every human life
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because
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due
to employment
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person
fulfill their basic needs.
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however
, more
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work
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used
to be finish at
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house
by hands,
yet
in the present time an increasing number of them
are done
by
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gadgets
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i
will discuss pros and cons.
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this
essay will discuss in up coming paragraphs. To
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with, there are
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points
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merits of done
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work
by using
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technical
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gadgets
.
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firstly
, in the present time
mostly
individual
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use
equipment's for
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work
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due
t this they save time
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because
they done
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work
easily
as well
as
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fastly
with the
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of
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machines
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, if
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person
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use
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technical
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gadgets
then they increase their ability and
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get
knowledge about modern things.
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they
learn
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different
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skills
with the
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help
of technology.
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on
the other hand, ample points
are mentioned
demerits of using
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machines
.
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firstly
, if
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person
done their
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machines
.
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firstly
, if
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person
done their
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work
by
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technical
equipment then they
tonally
depend on it after that they become lethargic.
Secondly
,
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due
to more
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use
of
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technical
obstacle
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because
when they
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use
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machines
than they do not do any physical
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work
after they face health problems such as
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backpain
, obesity
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more.
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,
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before
my pen down
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i
would like to say that
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technical
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gadgets
are give more benefit
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because
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due
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person
do
easily
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work
yet
it
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have
also
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some
drawbacks access
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use
of anything is harmful for human
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healthh
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IELTS essay many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays all work done by machines adv and disadv

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245 words
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