House jobs are not easy task to do. Most of the people take the support of machines to get the work done. There are some advantages of robotic work. However, the disadvantages are on much higher side.
First of all, reliance on machines make people more sluggish. Many house chores are now a days can be easily done manually, but because of availability of artificial intelligence, these works are dedicated to machines. For example, boiling water for tea or coffee does not require any heavy exercise but these machines like electric kettles or dispensers let people do the work quicker and easier and therefore convince them to make less efforts and let the machine do the rest.
Secondly, artificial intelligence create many health problems such as obesity. Increasing weight has now been one of the alarming point of unhealthy lives. Many people indulge in this problem due to depending on machine work. For example, previously my mother used to wash dishes with her bare hands but after the dish washer was purchased, the efforts were reduced to almost half. My mother was happy as now she has to make less efforts on dish washing but on the other hand she started gaining her weight. Before she was fit enough and used to take care of herself but now greatly engaged in medicines to keep her health steady.
In conclusion, despite the advantages of machines like fewer efforts and allow to dedicate their free time to other important tasks, the disadvantages have more strong points. Therefore, it is recommended that people should rely lesser on machines to keep active and healthy.
House
jobs are not easy task to do. Most of the
people
take the support of
machines
to
get
the
work
done. There are
some
advantages of robotic
work
.
However
, the disadvantages are on much higher side.
First of all
, reliance on
machines
make
people
more sluggish.
Many
house
chores are
now a days
can be
easily
done
manually
,
but
because
of availability of artificial intelligence, these works
are dedicated
to
machines
.
For example
, boiling water for tea or coffee does not require any heavy exercise
but
these
machines
like electric kettles or dispensers
let
people
do the
work
quicker and easier and
therefore
convince them to
make
less
efforts
and
let
the
machine
do the rest.
Secondly
, artificial intelligence create
many
health problems such as obesity. Increasing weight has
now
been one of the alarming point of unhealthy
lives
.
Many
people
indulge in this problem due to depending on
machine
work
.
For example
, previously my mother
used
to wash dishes with her bare hands
but
after the dish washer was
purchased
, the
efforts
were
reduced
to almost half. My mother was happy as
now
she
has to
make
less
efforts
on dish washing
but
on the other hand
she
started
gaining her weight.
Before
she
was fit
enough
and
used
to take care of herself
but
now
greatly
engaged in medicines to
keep
her health steady.
In conclusion
, despite the advantages of
machines
like fewer
efforts
and
allow
to dedicate their free time to other
important
tasks, the disadvantages have more strong points.
Therefore
, it
is recommended
that
people
should rely lesser on
machines
to
keep
active and healthy.
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25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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