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Many inventions of the world

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electricity has many uses we cook with it, and heat and light our homes with it. it also powers our cell phones. many people consider Thomas Edison - the inventor of the phonograph - to be one of the greatest creative thinkers of all time. Ellison was partially deaf. He struggled to find a steady job before eventually becoming a famous inventor. Some inventions are very expensive, so not everyone can afford them. The French chemist Louis Pasteur is famous for his research on the causes and prevention of diseases
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the inventor of the phonograph
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to be one of the greatest creative thinkers of all time.

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not everyone can afford them. The French chemist Louis Pasteur is
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for his research on the causes and prevention of
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diseases

IELTS essay Many inventions of the world

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
89 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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