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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach. gaQ3
In a nutshell, on one side of the heated discourse are people who firmly believe that GM crops pose a threat to human health and biodiversity. On the other side are mainly scientists who are convinced that genetic engineering of plants represents a technology with enormous potential for increasing crop in an environmentally benign way. This controversy has to degenerate into a sterile in order to find ways of using this technology in the safest possible manner.
In a nutshell, on one side of the heated discourse are
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people
who
firmly
believe that GM crops pose a threat to human health and biodiversity. On the other side are
mainly
scientists who
are convinced
that genetic engineering of plants represents a technology with enormous potential for increasing crop in an
environmentally
benign way. This controversy
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has to
degenerate into a sterile in order to find ways of using this technology in the safest possible manner.

IELTS essay Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

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