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Many go by the customer review on the internet for making a purchase decision while other think this might not be right tool for deciding upon a purchase. Discuss both the views by giving your opinion.

Many go by the customer review on the internet for making a purchase decision while other think this might not be right tool for deciding upon a purchase. o6LQX
In the 21st century, shopping has become a cup of tea due to digital shopping and customer feedback regarding any goods on the internet. Generally, a plethora of customers making their buying decision after referring to reviews, while others believe totally opposite. According to me, a person should go with both things while buying anything. In the further essay, I will discuss both views with a reasonable conclusion. First of all, today’s generation is very fast and smart in terms of shopping and buying decisions. Usually, they buy things from online shopping applications such as amazon and flip kart in that they get the facility of a customer review of all the products due to that not only they can easily know that whether the product is valuable or not but also they get information form where they can get the best quality of the product. As a consequence of this facility, anyone can make decisions quickly and easily. For instance, a person wants to buy a bike and by referring feedbacks he can know from where he should purchase (company) and which one is affordable and worth of value. On the other hand, people think through the reviews deciding purchase is not the appropriate method, because nowadays, to increase the high sale of their merchandise they create fake revies by making fake customer. Even more, every person has their own taste so, by making decisions from review, could be not proper and there are some positive and negative opinions and by referring that a person can come in turmoil easily. To conclude, as both views are correct in their point. But In my honest opinion, a person should also go through reviews and even they should personally go and know about a product that it is worth for them or not.
In the 21st century,
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shopping
has become a cup of tea due to digital
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shopping
and
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customer
feedback regarding any
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goods
on the internet.
Generally
, a plethora of
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customers
making their buying
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decision
after referring to
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reviews
, while others believe
totally
opposite.
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According to me
, a
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person
should
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go with
both things while buying anything. In the
further
essay, I will discuss both views with a reasonable conclusion.

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First of all
,
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today
’s generation is
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very
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fast
and smart in terms of
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shopping
and buying
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decisions
.
Usually
, they
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buy
things from online
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shopping
applications such as
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amazon
and flip kart in that they
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get
the facility of a
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customer
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review
of all the
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products
due to that not
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only
they can
easily
know that whether the
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product
is valuable or not
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but
also
they
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get
information form where they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the best quality of the
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product
. As a consequence of this facility, anyone can
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make
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decisions
quickly
and
easily
.
For instance
, a
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person
wants to
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buy
a bike and by referring feedbacks he can know from where he should
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purchase
(
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company
) and which one is affordable and worth of value.

On the other hand
,
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people
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think
through the
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reviews
deciding
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purchase
is not the appropriate method,
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because
nowadays, to increase the high sale of their merchandise they create fake
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revies
by making fake
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customer
. Even more, every
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person
has their
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own
taste
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so
, by making
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decisions
from
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review
, could be not proper and there are
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some
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positive
and
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negative
opinions and by referring that a
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person
can
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come
in turmoil
easily
.

To conclude
, as both views are correct in their point.
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But
In my honest opinion, a
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person
should
also
go through
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reviews
and even they should
personally
go and know about a
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product
that it is worth for them or not.
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IELTS essay Many go by the customer review on the internet for making a purchase decision while other think this might not be right tool for deciding upon a purchase.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
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